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Yee

Good start to what seems to be a promising read! I'm curious to find out more and I know that anyone reading this will want to too. It is something that encaptivates you and makes you ask "what's next?" as you'll flip through the chapters. Of course we can't tell now since there's only one chapter, but if the next chapters are anything like the first, you will not regret picking up this story. A minor thing I would like to see is some additional attention the smaller details about the people and the world around them in the future, but regardless, I am looking forward to how the rest of the suspenseful and intriguing story pans out!