I like the way you describe the looks of the person
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She was thinking funny things even in serious situations. Definitely not normal
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I like the fact that it has a mixture of fantasy and modern at the same time. Keep it up, author!
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True fact! Hopefully, the author did not make her look too brave or something which is a plus point!
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The first chapter was fun to read. It clearly shows the potential of the story and how skilled the author is! Good job!
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I am feeling an urge to see the slender man😂😂😂
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Oh My God!!!!!!!!!!! The beginning is superb! I really got goosebumps reading it! So cool and intriguing! You gave us a glimpse of how the story is going to be in the first chapter! I love it!
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I love the synopsis! It's short but doesn't make it difficult to understand what's going on. Breta is a really complicated character and most authors try to avoid writing about these characters. But you described the character well and amazingly! Good work!
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She should be