Webnovel Author: Stantheman132 - Novel Collection

(says chapter 2, i read all 5 chapters on my phone but am writing on my computer) My only problem with this is that it's too short right now :\ i love this novel so far, it's a really nice read so far and the double main characters/pov makes it even better and even more interesting. I have no problems with the grammar as well, the writing flows fairly nicely. Can't wait to see how this story is fleshed out, and to read further interactions between our 2 protagonists

I really enjoy this novel so far. While the writing quality itself isn’t the best, its still readable. I love the relationship between miro and mira, cant wait to see how it progresses

(It says chapter 3 because o read up to chapter 3 on my phone but on my computer read to chapter 10) This is a pretty good novel to say the least. The concept of the time protectors agency is great and it seems like a lot of thought has been put into this. My only main problem is the grammar. I gave it 3 stars for the writing quality because despite being mostly readable, the grammar can make it difficult to read at times. However, this does have a lot of potential and i cant wait to see how this novel fleshes out!

This story seems pretty good so far, but has a few significant issues that hold it back from being very good, if not great. The first major problem is the writing. The grammar is not the best, which could possibly cause readers to be turned off from reading this novel. The second issue i have with it is that it seems kind of surface level with the characters. A bit more depth put into the characters would make this story so much better. Good job so far, author, but it needs a bit of work. It says chapter 3 but thats because i only read up to chapter 3 on my computer, i read up to chapter 9 on my phone but am writing this review on my computer

Hey guys, shameless author here writing a review for his own novel. While the main characters goal is to climb the heavens claws, the story will most likely take a while before we even reach the first one. However, I will definitely try and make it worth the wait :) If this story seems interesting to you, then please read it. I am personally very excited to write this novel, and having readers be there with Ray along his journey would make the story even better.