Like i commented before, it might be better to explain the power system or how the energy inside him works before trying to use it
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Fantasy · Magecrafter
He doesn't have any aspect nor divine attributes or power, then how did he manifest clothes out of nowhere? Even tho he said he had some energy in the body, it's not clear how that energy is used
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Fantasy · Magecrafter
dudee... why does it always have to be a human, it could have been something more stronger and terrifying that fits him like this : (cause creatures made out of darkness is way more cooler)
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Fantasy · Magecrafter
I'm back
"I'm back!" I smiled with a wicked grin.
Fantasy · Magecrafter
*Error correction : are=were
No signs of life are seen as it was all black.
Fantasy · Ordki_Hozei
*Passage Error : a man "was" walking alone "without' knowing where to go . It "didn't" have anything. (PS: I don't have much fluency in English, but I corrected the passage with what I thought was right, please comment on any wrong corrections I made) :)
In a dark space where nothing could be seen, a man is walking alone with it not knowing where to go. It doesn't have anything.
Fantasy · Ordki_Hozei
while I understand that this personality was made to make the mc special ..... you do understand that billions of people worldwide feel like they want to die everytime r8.
The only one who could actually feel at home in such a world filled with destruction, carnage, and malice… was me.
Fantasy · Magecrafter
(sry author I really can't stop)
"They're coming!"
Fantasy · Magecrafter
yeah sure..u were expecting the pain you could have avoided..lol
"I was expecting this…" I muttered, still wincing in pain.
Fantasy · Magecrafter
*her
ch 0 2 CHAPTER ONE:-BARTERED PROPOSAL (2)
Teen · RAJABHIDIXIT
CONGRATULATIONS 🎉🎉!! WE HAVE A WINNER HERE🎉🎉🤣
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Fantasy · RinoZ
The fact I read the whole two chapters without even noticing even one grammatical mistakes makes me wanna cry now after the Author's note.
ch 0 2 Chapter 2: Rough Welcome
Fantasy · Romeru
thank u for the chaps 🥰
ch 228 Final Phase Location
Fantasy · TimVic
lol the best time to sleep is when something important happens 🤣
Unfortunately, he wasn't, and just as these notifications appeared, they also disappeared a moment later.
Fantasy · TimVic
finally someone asked lol
'I wonder how much Qi I will gain by consuming the Demonic Spider's monster core.' Yuan thought to himself with the shiny monster core in his hands, preparing to pop it into his mouth like eating hard candy.
Games · MyLittleBrother
cringe
Primordial Descent
Fantasy · Magecrafter