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idk what to say.. lacks detail. i am usually not the type to leave negative criticism but this story kinda lacks some elements. mc gets things done rather easily. but that is not the main problem. the mcs morality is fluctuating. sometimes he is goody two shoes and sometimes he is brutal. justifications for is actions are lacking

I did not think it would be any good• Its actually perfect so far• Explanation of ki and spiritual power is rather good and mystery of senju bean and dragon ball is well explained• i hope you dont drop it