Moments 4
were is used after plurals but in the text (whole mountain were in very bad) it is used after mountain which is singular.
After 30 min all the immortal clan were completely annihilated and whole mountain were in very bad state and all the tress were already uprooted from their places .....
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Eastern · Siddhantking
banquet, so please wait and enjoy it. Charge all the ancestor There are many places where 'and' is used again and again. It can be divided into may sentences for better reading experience.
"hehehe how can we let our guest leave before we even start blood banquet so please wait and enjoy it and charge all the ancestor and have fun in blood banquet "said 2st ancestor in happy tone as he already restricted whole mountain with array only they can come in but they can't leave the mountain.....
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There are many places where " " are not used properly. Like in this this paragraph the ending " should be put here (our immortal clan stronghold " said an immortal)
"hahahaha, previous Ancestors of the divine sect today will be your last day as you all will be going to die and your sect will become our immortal clan stronghold said an immortal who were emitting powerful pressure as his cultivation is at life and death tribulation 3 stage .....and behind him stand 10 immortal clan members who have level 2 life and death tribulation "...
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Eastern · Siddhantking
In this paragraph, the name of the 1st sect master is written as Zhang sun which is latter used for the father of Zhang qin. Also in the starting paragraphs, his name was mentioned as Zhang tan. There are a lot of other mistakes. Before uploading any chapter, kindly edit it.
"Now, Zhang tan when just our sect descend from the above realm we have to found the suitable location for our sect and at that time the sect master was Zhang Sun. He was at peak of life and death tribulation cultivation stage and he was unrivaled in the earthly plane even other master from the other sect who descend with us can't do anything to him....but he was afraid that he can't fulfill his duty and also knows that his sect will get degrade with time so, he had to asked for the prophecy from his best friend i.e. grand elder from that time of our sect and because of that grand elder also looses his life but zhang sun got the prophecy and when he heard the prophecy he was shocked but still he write the prophecy said the Ancestor 1 in serious tone".....
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