It could be written here "Glancing back at the list of Futuristic technology" . Just Clear and Concise. No added big words
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Fantasy 路 koladeizdavid
Just a simple act of clicking "Next Page" has soo many over the top words written here.There is no need for soo many words describing simple action or thoughts done by characters.
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Fantasy 路 koladeizdavid
HONEST REVIEWS : The story premise was good at the start with MC being OP as Hell but then comes his personality with childish hero complex. I like MC with hero personality but this one is just childish and i hope it can improve. Also forced relationships are really bad even though no romantic interest has been found fully developed in this story. Small Spoiler Warning: Personally I dislike the fact that he feels to much responsible for so many people dying, when he didnt know about about that event. This scene happened more than 2 times. For the final result, I feel like this story has somethings to improve but it still has potential.
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Thanks for the chapter Author Sama. As for the future chapters, if you have the clear vision of your story then you van surely release next chapters. [img=recommend] After this Chapter, I really need at least 100 chp just to binge forward [img=update]
ch 12 Chapter 12: Liu Feng鈥檚 Erasure
Fantasy 路 KhaiBest
thanks for the chapter [img=update]
ch 11 Chapter 11: BUD
Fantasy 路 KhaiBest
Thanks for the chapter. But now i need many more chapters to help my hunger. Please Author San please Mass Release chapters right now. [img=update]
ch 0 9 Chapter 9: Liu Meng鈥檚 Appearance
Fantasy 路 KhaiBest
Thanks for the chapter Author-San.
ch 60 60: One Month
Fantasy 路 Anon22
Hello Mighty Customer here! 馃榿 The idea for this novel is interesting but let me tell you some point that might help. 1. Keep eng grammer on mark. Give a healthy amount of First Person & Third Person POV. 2. Don't make this a Gotta Catch em all Harem 馃 Novel. 1 or 2 love interest at most. 3. The Idea of Sandbox is already way Overpowered, So don't immediately make him a Super Duper Uber God. The sheer possibilities of Sandbox are limitless. 4. You can blend Scifi & magic genre together in this I guess. 5. Maybe you can also add different world travel element in this novel. 6. Also MOST IMPORTANT: Don't make the MC a dense, beta and a dumb idiot kind of guy. This just ruins the story and character development can hardly work here sometimes. I hope the points i made to help u don't discourage u. The idea is gr8 and i hope you can create a Gem out of this. [img=recommend]
Omni SandBox
Sci-fi 路 RestingSydrome