Dao_Guy - Profile

some mc need to die. lol good job

I love the story that you made I especially admire the beginning chapters where your character was growing into what he is now. there's no other story that I looked forward to seeing develop than this. it's exciting hearing about the personalities of his monsters and how he interacts and guides them into overcoming the next problem. your character growth was awesome. I do feel that your character has become way too overpowered and is Almighty and his own right and there is no struggle for him to go through the next moment I feel that there's a rush to finish the story instead of letting me as a reader experience the story as you did in the first portions of your writing. I really like your story thank you thank you thank you

awesome thanks for the book