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Bre_Bell_2517

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Whoa girl

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"Be a bit more polite. I'm not a fan of too politeness, but a bit, just a bit. Be a bit polite."

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She loves veiny arms for sure 馃槀

His arms were strong and possibly veiny. I did not know if it was veiny for sure, but I guessed it.

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Flesh being molded into something.... the sound seems horrible

I heard another sound. It was not a growl, but it felt like flesh being molded into something else. The sound was disgusting. It was not loud, but still, my ears seemed to hear it.

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Hey, I love the last two sentences especially. Good use of words there, author!

My hair was as messy as it could get. I had thrown it up in a loose ponytail without first brushing it that morning. Now my hair was in an even worse condition. My eyes were tired and bulging out of their sockets it seemed. I never slept enough at night. I had homework, but mostly because I did not want to. I loved to watch the moon, the stars shining in the bluish-black sky. Leaning against the window frame, I would try to feel the peacefulness of the night.

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Oh darling

"All right, then. You'd better come straight back from school. We are having a family gathering. You should be there," she said, smiling, not realizing how much it wounded my heart on the inside. How much I wished to have a perfect family like Zoe!

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Morning lover poetry vibe馃ぃ

As I reached Zoe's house, I saw that she was not there. I thought that probably she was still sleeping. It happened mostly to me that I kept sleeping in the morning when Mom had to hammer on my door to wake me up. But Zoe was an early bird. She loved mornings. I had a feeling that she had a morning lover poetry vibe. She used to talk oddly as well, as if she was not living in the modern age, but in the ancient time.

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I was never bullied in school. It seemed as if no one wanted to bully me. Mostly because they knew I would not flinch from hitting someone hard if needed. Once a girl, almost twice as tall as I was, had called me a virgin in front of the whole school. It was not a problem. I did not care at all. But when she tried to dump all of my books on the ground, she made a grave mistake. I smacked her across the face, standing on my tiptoes, breaking her nose, and leaving a massive bruise on her upper lip.

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And I can relate to this too

"Ella, hurry up! You're going to be late again!" Mom's thunderous voice came echoing in the room from downstairs.

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Same here, sis

I could not believe how unfair my life was. I had prayed thirty thousand times in my life that my life would be more fun and that I would not have to live this boring life. But no, there was no change. Like every single day, I had to get up in the morning and get ready to go to the boring school.

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Thank god it wasn't love at first sight. I really got tired with the same thing going on again and again in almost every story

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That's brutal

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Romance!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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She is adorable!

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Yes, it's quite unsettling

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At least, Conri is not arrogant

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So realistic, this Arunulf guy

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Yeah, typical

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I like the way you described the action scenarios. You did not mess the scenes up with excessive details or fewer details. Everything was balanced. Like it!

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