Webnovel Author: OrdinaryRandom

It's a hot mess, do not read this don't even try you won't be able to. Grammar is none existent. I would've recommended that the author use Grammarly but I doubt that it could help. read some good books author.

Steiner's Memories

Fantasy · Ian_Gopez

OrdinaryRandom

2yr

Posted

All you lack is writing quality, apart from that you have everything. Myah seems like a good character although his design is quite feminine ;) Keep up the good work. I've read 3 chapters till now and apart from the grammar, everything is nice.

War Soul: Tale of The White Blossom Spearman.

Fantasy · ChibiSage

OrdinaryRandom

2yr

Commented

Myah's background is tragic, and his uncle betraying him is even more tragic.

ch 0 1 Chapter 1: A new beginning.

War Soul: Tale of The White Blossom Spearman.

Fantasy · ChibiSage

OrdinaryRandom

2yr

Replied to Traenson

I think that's what he's doing... no offense author.

I JUST WANT A PEACEFUL LIFE

Fantasy · Alex_Destro

OrdinaryRandom

2yr

Commented

dude, you can't describe stats with "Average" it needs to be a number. just don't add a system if you're going to write average

(Strength: Average )

Reborn And Became A Wendigo

Fantasy · Drakonos_Drake

OrdinaryRandom

2yr

Commented

A demonic-looking angel? yeah right

" Child you died while shielding your friend and caught my attention. I am the Angel Of reincarnation you will be reborn in a world of your not so typical fantasy world of systems"

Reborn And Became A Wendigo

Fantasy · Drakonos_Drake

OrdinaryRandom

2yr

Commented

Hey! your novel doesn't have any reviews. Mind if we review swap? I'll review yours and in exchange, you can review mine. if you don't want to just delete this comment.

Nothing unusual was happening, it was just another peaceful day in the month of September, with no hint of what was to come. However this peaceful day would come to be known as "Day Zero" in the new calendar - our current Venante calendar - also commonly known as the "demon fall"...

Anomaly Hunters

Fantasy · JgHistorys

OrdinaryRandom

2yr

Posted

Why a 5 star? cus I'm a shameless author! okay seriously though do read this. I tried my best to bring something new to the table. if you guys don't like it just drop it, but if you like it review it! Thanks

I Became An Anti-Hero

Fantasy · OrdinaryRandom

OrdinaryRandom

2yr

Commented

I'll continue it, but I'm currently busy in real life.

ch 28 Chapter 28: Need a ship

Space Demon System

Fantasy · OrdinaryRandom

OrdinaryRandom

2yr

Replied to Snoodle_Booper

oh, btw I've dropped this I can't continue this novel anymore idk what was wrong with me when I wrote this but when i started but reading OH BOY did I write A LOT of things that could assist my—non exisistant— goal of going to prison at a young age.