My motto for storytelling is.... First time reading, it's great. Second time reading the story, it's damn amazing!
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Yes, I'm aware that there's no blood on her clothes. And believe me, I tried really hard. But the A.I is unable to separate tears from blood... and I don't think any of you want to see face covered with blood right?
Caught off guard, she stood frozen, her face a mask of blankness, unable to express the tumult of emotions within her. But then, in a trembling whisper, she uttered, "Yang... Huo...?"
Eastern · TheUnsus
and then he was ambushed by the bandits and died unjustfully. end of story.
Alone, with only his horse for company, he headed towards the morning sun, and faded into the distance.
Eastern · Autumn comes after night rain
i would like to double it and give it to the next person!
Eighteen years old: You have broken through to the Seventh Grade Realm and cultivated both skills to the third level. However, you discover that relentless cultivation is of no avail and this small town can't provide any help in your cultivation, so you decide to leave.
Eastern · Autumn comes after night rain
thats... not true at all, a simple google search completely disagree with this. It's in fact quite a well known, niche fact, that you can grow muscle with just visualization. but i think it is mostly used for improving skill rather than actually growing muscles
In fact, scientists have already debunked that no matter how hard the brain activity in VR was, it wouldn't affect the body at all. At least human muscle mass wouldn't change just by lying down and exerting their brain a little bit.
Fantasy · ShuviLily
You've made a good point. (Sorry for the long response. TLDR: I'll take note of it) When writing chap 1, I did consider making the MC super weak and rely solely on his intelligence to succeed. But as you can see in chap 1, I rejected the idea cause Yang Huo isn't nigh-omniscience. He's just exceedingly good at understanding people's desires and using that to his advantage, so strength is still necessary. In fact, the MC wants to train now (hence he's gng back to his room rn). Don't worry, I won't abandon the power system, too much potential to leave out. With proper setup, you bet the MC will wring out every bit of it to make smart moves. This is a fantasy world after all. I would have gone for realistic novel otherwise. However, mind games will always be a core part of the story, but I'm aware that constant politics can be exhausting. If there's constant politics, the MC needs to keep churning out insanely smart moves, and no way my brain can keep that up. After all, in chap 1, the System wants the MC to flex against other smart characters, so I better deliver on that XD. (Quality moves > Quantity moves) But regardless, I admit I didn't think this through enough, so I'll take note for sure.
ch 0 8 A Letter Is All You Need
Eastern · TheUnsus
Meeting the FML is super close now! But here's a sad little spoiler, if the story goes as plan, although interactions will unfold as usual, the story will still maintain an air of mystery around the FML. But don't worry, the surprise will be unveiled by the end of the current arc!
ch 0 8 A Letter Is All You Need
Eastern · TheUnsus
Regarding cultivation and techniques, simplicity reigns supreme!! I prefer not to confuse readers with new terminology just for the sake of uniqueness from other novels. That's a backward approach. Instead, I believe it is more effective to introduce twists and new systems within the already familiar frameworks, making it easier for new readers to grasp.
ch 0 8 A Letter Is All You Need
Eastern · TheUnsus
The world itself will gradually unravel as the story progresses. It's not good practice to overwhelm readers with excessive information in one go, so I'm opting for a slower approach.
ch 0 8 A Letter Is All You Need
Eastern · TheUnsus
Right? Baseless claims are useless! Especially from the one leading them! I mean, who would want to say that their team has a traitor? This is why our MC immediately calls him out! Better gives us evidence!
The uncle quickly explained. "I can assure you that none of them are the traitors! We have a system in place where we randomly pair them up every few days. If one of them were a traitor, their partner would notice immediately!"
Eastern · TheUnsus
Hoo~~ Believe me, I also want to write it and is really itching for it! So let's hope we both have the patience for it!!
As everyone in the room absorbed Yang Huo's words in silence, not knowing how to react, one person, however, stayed quiet for a different reason, and Yang Huo glanced at that person.
Eastern · TheUnsus
I've learned that I shouldn't rashly makes promises unless I am completely sure. But thank goodness I'm confident with this one. The next update is within 24-48 hours even after including outside factor. Most likely today though, I just need to sleep first. Zzz
[How could you?!?! How could you viciously manipulate me like that, Host?!?! I can't believe I got played by you and gave you extra rewards! You're so heartless! Shameless!]
Eastern · TheUnsus
Then you are in for a treat!
ch 0 2 I Have a Fiancee?!
Eastern · TheUnsus
Now now, if I gave you the answer so early on, that wouldn't be fun would it? Let's forget about this one shall we~~ Just treat this one as a joke like everyone else for now XD
[How could you?!?! How could you viciously manipulate me like that, Host?!?! I can't believe I got played by you and gave you extra rewards! You're so heartless! Shameless!]
Eastern · TheUnsus
Nonono...... thank you😆
ch 0 6 You dare accuse me?
Eastern · TheUnsus
New chap is out. Hope you enjoy!
ch 0 6 You dare accuse me?
Eastern · TheUnsus
ch 0 6 You dare accuse me?
Eastern · TheUnsus
I wonder~~
ch 10 Host! Don't bully a woman please!
But Wife, I Really Am a Villain!
Eastern · TheUnsus