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okay I spoke too soon but it was such a noticeable possible mistake to have it clarified a few paragraphs later. sorry for that jump the gun

Author.. a pair of wings are 2 wings. pair=2. writing 2 pairs of wings would mean the person has 4 wings.

your welcome. it is a good story!!

tons of misspelled words here I guess they haven't had their English edit done completely yet luckily the misspelled words do not affect the story badly but there are noticeable. but it is a good story so far

seems weird that he is nervous about gold and silver coins which are normal currency but he'll take an unidentified strange dark brown saliva from a dragon and try to sell it

Viola is quite an unobservant and clueless person for being an alpha. I hope her character grows

ha ha I spoke too soon!!

thank you for acknowledging. that makes you a very thoughtful author that's going to do very well

first or clothes that she was put in were barely enough for her but now later in the chapter they're oversized

not yet..:-)

it's sad that we don't have any descriptions of what either of them look like

ancestor master dragon repair? what does repair mean in the sentence?

the venue only seats 1,000. this was mentioned in an earlier chapter. so there cannot be thousands there although they could be lining the walls and the highway

Quanue is very talkative

excellent story with great fleshing out of all characters. anyone reading my post please look to see that there are other stories that take place in the same universe written by the same author. and they're just as fun

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Treein, a quick edit for you. in a previous chapter twice was said that they were gone for 8 years. but Yankee is only a 6-year-old boy. so their exploration was only 5 years not 8 years.

it's not a bad story I'm afraid he's going to be meaner to her than is necessary to have to read. but it really needs to have better editing for English readers. so many mistakes

why doesn't male lead always have to smoke cigarettes. every single book. it's gross. it's unsanitary. it's unhealthy. and it's cliche

okkkk... the girl transmigration. the guy mentally woke up. so they did a brain swap. so he's awake but looks like the girl.. and the girl is in his sleeping body taking a rest from battling 3 years of an apocalypse.