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gonna read it now! I have high expectations. I'll tell you the problems it has. when I do. its my opinion and fact.

I had fun reading this comment section. will the book be better then this?

its a great story so far. i recommend it. better then the trashy novels out there. just wish there was more to his system. maybe a bit more uniqueness?

how should i put this... its not exactly a bad story. compared to others this is way better. im dropping this book because it just seems lacking. the MC is ruthless. he doesn't even try to see if other humans were the same. he just killed them all when they tried helping it. its hard to understand what his objective is. ive read around 20 chapters. i know the author is new to this and all. and i respect his efforts in making a book with a more funny atmosphere. but this book is quite lacking. there isent much detail for the surroundings or the characters so i dont know what to visualize. im truly disappointed. but dont keep my opinion from reading this book! maybe you might see its value. and if you're the author reading this. see this as constructive criticism!

I hope you guys enjoy my novel! I don't have much done right now but I will try my best to keep making content. I'm new to writing novels so please give me some helpful feedback.

i haven't read the book but i have high expectations. cultivation is the worst genre. so when i saw this book without that genre. i downloaded it as quick as possible to see if it was worth reading. i hope its as good as i think it will be!