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Good luck. best wishes.

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as long as your trying to improve its all good. although you could maybe work on the conversations between them. its a little hard to follow along sometimes. so if you could for example do something like this " insert conversation " , it would help to follow along , and make it look a little neater

Authors note: I was really thinking about taking a break but I suddenly get these ideas then I start typing the chapters and I have no idea if the chapter is good or not. I really have nothing to write in the new moon arc since there literally nothing there except some moments in it. It will probably over by 3 or 4 chapters 5 at max. I know my English and grammar are really suck but does it make you guys sick just by reading my fanfic.

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