Happy New Year! May your kitchen be full of bacon!
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Fantasy · mrant12
That's true! Thanks for catching it!
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Games · Ryyona
Good point! Added in something to make it clearer.
Now this is interesting. Your comment sent me down a rabbit hole of grammar. "Gotten" seems to be used in American English according to most of the sites I encountered. Source: https://oneminuteenglish.org/en/have-got-vs-have-gotten/ I'm using UK English so I will stick to "got" as a past participle. In this case I will be using the present perfect tense (have got) instead of the past perfect tense (had got) because playing the game is something that happened in the past but is still happening now for Diana and Joshua. Source: https://englishlive.ef.com/blog/language-lab/english-grammar-help-present-perfect-and-past-perfect/ Thank you for pointing this out! Hopefully, I got this correct. O.O
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Games · Ryyona
Thank you!
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Games · Ryyona
Sweet! Thanks for catching that!
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Games · Ryyona
@crackmeup I edited the equipment stats and unfortunately it deleted your comment that was attached to it. Just wanted to say that you raised a very good point and after some discussion we decided to change the starting equipment stats so that it's more intuitive. Thank you for your feedback!
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Games · Ryyona
You know what, you raise a good point about the equipment system. We decided to change up the starting equipment to make it more intuititive. Thanks for the feedback!
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Games · Ryyona
Thank you for catching it! Yes, Eternal Snow should be Autumn Snow!
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Games · Ryyona
Hahaha :D
The call rang and rang, and finally timed out. Such a good brother that your sister couldn't be bothered to answer your call? Isn't this the second time she's ignoring you? That little devil of a voice rang out from somewhere within me. She's busy! I reprimanded that little voice. Probably fighting an enormous house-sized boss or something.
Games · Ryyona
Thanks for enjoying our work!
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Games · Ryyona
Thank you for the support!
ch 24 Chapter 24
Games · Ryyona
Thank you for reading it :)
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Games · Ryyona
Thank you for enjoying our work!
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Games · Ryyona
Hope that you continue to enjoy our tales!
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Games · Ryyona
Hi thank you for sharing your feelings! my co-author mrant12 would be happy to hear that you really liked Joshua's part! You should check out his other works like "Speed is King" and "I Devour Mecha" which are similar to that style. he also updates really regularly!
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Games · Ryyona