An Author exploring their own ways.
2021-06-15 Joined Norway
A big thanks to anyone who reads comment or share, you are all truly wonderful.
ch 0 4 Within pages
Fantasy · MidnightEgg
There is plenty more in store ^-^
ch 0 3 The Town
Fantasy · MidnightEgg
Sheesh, just how small is her husband lol
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Fantasy · Perverted_Fella
Laximus XD, what a lad.
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Fantasy · Perverted_Fella
you will have to see the god of death himself.
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Fantasy · Perverted_Fella
how you lived your lives
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Fantasy · Perverted_Fella
Good luck mate.
ch 0 1 Vincent's Death
Fantasy · Perverted_Fella
would advise finding a synonym to replace suction. But so far I see wast improvements in your ability as a writer. Keep it up.
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Fantasy · Perverted_Fella
XD
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Fantasy · Perverted_Fella
Well, they are quite important, but we're lacking a fair bit of context as to why that is.
ch 14 Beyond
Fantasy · MidnightEgg
She could see how nervous her husband was.
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Eastern · Zero_O
Just looked like one single piece of metal (The extra just is unnessecary and breaks the flow of the sentence)
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Eastern · Zero_O
Nice start for our protagonist, Skullius the bony boi.
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Fantasy · Shade_Arjuun
Use the word demoted when speaking about a downgrade.
I stealthily absorbed their mana, feeling a chilling sensation in my bones as I did so before leaving just enough juice to keep them from being promoted to regular stones.
Fantasy · Shade_Arjuun
You can remove the "a"
Then there was a silence.
Fantasy · Shade_Arjuun
That's the end of volume 1, and we'll finally get a true peak beyond the door. And again many thanks to the people who have picked this up, you are all truly wonderful.
ch 14 Beyond
Khatryn: Beyond the Door
Fantasy · MidnightEgg