good
ch 40 Getting used to battle
Games · Breuno
great
ch 36 Plan of action - Part 2
Games · Breuno
I need pass haha!!!
ch 80 Chapter 77 : Sato Gets Serious
Games · Tengu_of_Old
we don't know anything about the MC and we're on it 60....
ch 63 Chapter 60 : Yukino Vs Goro 2
Games · Tengu_of_Old
good job
ch 53 Chapter 50 : Emperor’s Might in trouble
Games · Tengu_of_Old
I'm already late haha, but I still answer, maybe I'm right in my comments. 1. It was already clear that the MC is powerful, but I hope he has an evolution or growth over time. 2. The way to explain the characters and the world is very interesting, I hope I hope you don't forget the main character, I think you put it aside 3. If they include one or more women it does not matter as long as it is not forced
ch 50 Excuses, Suggestions and a whole lot of boring stuff but just read it.
Games · Tengu_of_Old
The way of approaching the story seems interesting to me, although it would be good to know more about the protagonist, isn't it that his family was practically a millionaire and now they don't have enough space for a VR booth?
ch 45 Chapter 43 : War 1
Games · Tengu_of_Old
good job
ch 42 Chapter 40 : Sato’s Advice
Games · Tengu_of_Old
random haha
ch 40 Chapter 38 : Your friend can be your enemy (Flashback chapter)
Games · Tengu_of_Old
good description
ch 37 Chapter 35 : A spar with grandfather
Games · Tengu_of_Old
this novel has potential
ch 35 Chapter 33 : System Upgrade
Games · Tengu_of_Old
its okey
ch 43 Killing and injury
A New World, an immersive game experience
Games · Breuno