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u forgot about the acid ant servant and soldiers in the list at the end

u might as well skip this chapter it is nothing but stats and repeat of previous chapter

this pov isn't the problem your timing for it is the problem you wait till a good part of the main story starts then interrupt it to put in this pov side story I just ignored it on the others cause it was only 1 or 2 chapters but interrupting the action of the main story with 17 chapters and there not even what is happening at the same time but past events that can literally be put in anywhere like for example before the swimsuit episode where the main story is in between action parts. I mean how would u like it if u were watching a movie that is just getting to the action part just to have it switch to a different character doing something completely different and not that exciting for 15 to 30 min before going back to the action

just a reworded duplicate of the last half of the previous chapter

this chapter and the next one are nothing but a waist of time and money just recording the previous chapter with maybe a sentence worth of new content so in other words they r nothing but filler I hope the next isnt the same

very boring chapter i hope u didn't go on like this for 3 1/2 chapters like last time just compress this kind of stuff in to at most half a chapter

only the last couple of paragraphs were not info already given to the reader so it was mostly a waste of time and money

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