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ch 40 Bruce's Bad Luck
Fantasy · Choka
Thank you for the chapters
ch 28 Real Trouble Brewing
Fantasy · Choka
Thanks for the chapter
ch 18 A Small Conversation
Fantasy · Choka
Hello writer As you requested I will give feedback about this novel and give criticism that might help the writer My first reaction when I saw this novel was I'm happy because someone else is making a novel with a villain theme without romance or Harem on a webnovel But after reading the first chapters there are some feelings of disappointment that I have in this novel The main problem this novel has is bad grammar mistakes No need to go too far. In the first chapter I just read I saw a lot of misspellings and errors with a lot of grammatical errors Some examples I saw 1. That's out if the question then (that's of not if ) 2. Instead go back home ( so he went back to his house ) that's all from me sorry if there are mistakes and thank you to the author for spending his time to make a Villain novel And I hope the author learns more English and last suggestions for writers, try to practice writing more often, hope it helps
ch 17 Fight Breaks out
Fantasy · Choka
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ch 40 Bruce's Bad Luck
The way of the villain
Fantasy · Choka