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I quite like the plot because I haven't read one like this, the start was kind of slow, but I was intrigued enough to leave a rating. it could use a bit of improving like the story pacing and describing a scene more but the scenes that were used were unique and how the power system works was also cool. hope to see you improve more.
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I quite like the plot because I haven't read one like this, the start was kind of slow, but I was intrigued enough to leave a rating. it could use a bit of improving like the story pacing and describing a scene more but the scenes that were used were unique and how the power system works was also cool. hope to see you improve more.
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Sci-fi · Eliov