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I think that this is novel has great potential. If the author posts just a little more frequent then it would be near perfect for this style of writing. The dialouge between characters is great and the lack of a obvious level system makes this type of dnd story work. Usually in these type of dnd stories you get just a list of actions like person a does this followed by person b does this and the monster reacts like this, but this story doesn't have that problem. Overall a great story with great potential.