Webnovel Author: Design_backup - Novel Collection

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Finally, a book that his word building in it. I wanted to find such a book for some time but nothing caught my attention.

For what it's worth, I really enjoyed this story. It was nice to see someone write long chapters for readers (even though clarity was never the best) but I will advise you to keep going on and improve in the future as well.

Lol. This gives out major gothic vibes to me and I hope you'll include more of the explorable elements of mythology or it'll feel like a missed opportunity

It's really good with minimal mistakes which makes it readable. I find the formatting to be clear as well which puts me in a good mood while reading. I will be sticking around to it and see after 50+ chapters how I feel about it.

No. He'll not stay single forever, but he's also 11 right now. Harem tag is there because it will become a huge plot point pretty soon

The synopsis seems catchy. The first few chapters are good as well and I can see this develop into more. The plot is just setting up so I will see how it developed before leaving more crit here

The concept is really good but I feel like there is too much dialogue in one place. It takes away from the action in some cases but that is just my opinion on the issue. I do like the story progression and how it is presented though so I would give the story that.

Author here. I will see how this performs in a week and then decide if I want to continue this or not. So, please try and enjoy as much as you can

Despite the abundance of harem on this site, there is a surprising lack of good ones. I find this one among the better ones since nothing seemed forced and the relationships seemed to have a background rather than jumping straight in

Glad to see you posting something like this. I really really like it and I'm going to add it into my library for future reads. Hopefully the updates will not be thay slow