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Sound good. I just hope that it don't turn into a cliche .The next chapter better give the MC a purpuse since the summury say that he is lokking for answers.Other than that ,Babylon have a lot to offer so I hope the fights will be good.

Just one chapter available , but i think it a good start the world building is creative and have room for expantion .The dynamic beetween character is also good you can feel their emotion ,although the author should put more work into the phrasing and some of the diologues between character .