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He can do that? That's amazing!
It had no eyes, yet its face was locked onto Mercury, somehow tracking him, even as he crawled over the ground, trying to get away. But his body refused to listen. The toxin was taking effect, slowing down his movement, and his heartbeat, to the point where it was barely audible. With his last moment of clarity, his thoughts already slowed down, Mercury split his mind, weaving some string to try and make the monster forget about him.
Mercury - Reborn as a Cat
Fantasy · Kernoel_77
*T*hat (capitalized)
So the mopaaw would die. That was all there was.
Mercury - Reborn as a Cat
Fantasy · Kernoel_77
fro*wn*
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mo*v*ed
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Fantasy · Kernoel_77
*had* acquired
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Mercury - Reborn as a Cat
Fantasy · Kernoel_77
I love Nicolai's obsession with his pigeons xD
"WE SCOUR THE WORLD FOR THEM, DEK!!!" Nicolai yelled. "We scour the world for them!"
Mercury - Reborn as a Cat
Fantasy · Kernoel_77
Oooooh that is how Mercury will meet him. Mercury will weave pigeons out of his dreams for him! ^^
"Chione thought that maybe this body-blueprint that all of us have isn't just in the body, as you've said, but also partially in the mind. Could also be a reason for the gap between stats and actual performance of worldwalkers. I suppose you could consider it an expansion of your astral self-hypothesis."
Mercury - Reborn as a Cat
Fantasy · Kernoel_77
I find it sweet that Alexander calls his horse his companion ^^
Alexander clenched his teeth in anger, drawing in deep breaths of air through his nose, spurring his companion on to go even faster. No matter what, this was probably his call to get out of retirement. He'd find whoever did this, show up at their front door and give them a piece of his mind, that much he promised himself.
Mercury - Reborn as a Cat
Fantasy · Kernoel_77
he *had* liked
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l*o*ng
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sa*f*e
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Fantasy · Kernoel_77
reache*d*
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Mercury - Reborn as a Cat
Fantasy · Kernoel_77
Uffff, poor Zyl. I didn't know that pulling the spark out of him was that... literal
When it finally showed on the surface, Zyl kept it there with his mind, then grabbed it, tearing his skin with his hand and pulling it out. With a final scream, now that he could draw breath again, he held his spark. Panting, he looked up at Berthorn, pushed his hands onto the floor and rose up shakily.
Mercury - Reborn as a Cat
Fantasy · Kernoel_77
How did you manage to make scared Berthorn the creepiest of all the villains?
"Truly, I don't even know what I wish for more right now. I need the spark, obviously, I've made that more than clear, and yet, this last page had been one of the calmest in my life. I almost want this to last forever," Berthorn continued, running a hand through his hair as his smile turned sinister.
Mercury - Reborn as a Cat
Fantasy · Kernoel_77
*e*yes
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Fantasy · Kernoel_77
the*y*
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Fantasy · Kernoel_77
word repetition: "perfect copy"
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Children of Deiwo
Fantasy · Isofyre
Wow, what a wild ride. Thanks for all of this and I can't wait to see where the story goes. See you soon ^^
ch 122 Day of Reckoning: Dusk
Mercury - Reborn as a Cat
Fantasy · Kernoel_77