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ok, no problem man. The author just rewrote the firt volume but I don't have the time to read it so I was wondering if you had read it or not.

did you like it?

This is detailed review written after reading all the published chapters (95 chapters). Writing quality: 4⭐ The author has stated that he is not a native English speaker so some mistakes are expected. There aren't that many spelling mistakes but grammatical errors are there. So four stars are enough. Story development: 4.5⭐ A very fast paced story with little info dumps. The author however slows down the story for a few chapters to explain a few things and all that. Overall the story isn't full of chapters in which MC is breaking through or creating pills using different ingredients. After all, we are all culture lovers. Character design: 3.5-4 ⭐ The characters are certainly good and the harem girls are strong and not like those weak girls in Chinese novels. It is mentioned that even the MC is afraid of them at certain times. I would have given more stats but we don't recieve that many character interactions and details until the second volume. Updating stability: 4.5⭐ The author updates seven chapters a week and I haven't seen him missing any updates. However, I would personally like ten to twelve chapters a week but if it will decrease the quality, please don't do it. World Background: 3.5-4.5⭐ Again I can't decide how many stars should I give. At first glance, the world is like any other Chinese cultivation world but later on we find out that it's a little darker than those world's, especially the Central continent. I am still accumulating information about the world and I might update this later on. Overall 4-4.5⭐If you love dual cultivation and harem with a MC who doesn't care about any young masters or royals, this novel is perfect for you. As I said earlier, this is a fast paced novel so you won't be bored sitting around waiting for the MC to breakthrough or creating a pill. I hope that this review helped you understand the novel.

I am sorry but I am dropping this novel. I know that we all want a peaceful life but this story is quite frustrating and annoying. The MC practically gives up on anything that comes his way, whether it's a battle or challenge or something like and his system basically makes him stronger while he does nothing. Other than that, there are many grammatical errors in this story and sometimes, I can't even read a chapter before finding mistakes. I am sorry but I will have to drop it as I cannot read it any further