This story has promise as for being a great tale... needs editing, as I struggled through the first chapter. Grammar needs fixing, when a character speaks, start a new paragraph and be sure to add "quotation marks". Some words needing spelled correctly.
Webnovel
This story has promise as for being a great tale... needs editing, as I struggled through the first chapter. Grammar needs fixing, when a character speaks, start a new paragraph and be sure to add "quotation marks". Some words needing spelled correctly.
ash and dawn
Teen · Jake_Zick