Thanks for advice, I truly appreciate it. As for the fact that I am writing every chapters name in their dialogue, its just because I still am trying to find style to wrote this story in. As I was checking on other authors I realized that, my and their style is day and night. Plus I understand that I should work on my grammar as well. But don't worry every part I wrote up until this moment is going to be adapted to my new writing style plus prologue part in my opinion is a little bit miss for my side so I will change it into MC past description. Over all I am glad you see potential in it and I promise to improve my self in future. [img=recommend]
Webnovel
Thanks for advice, I truly appreciate it. As for the fact that I am writing every chapters name in their dialogue, its just because I still am trying to find style to wrote this story in. As I was checking on other authors I realized that, my and their style is day and night. Plus I understand that I should work on my grammar as well. But don't worry every part I wrote up until this moment is going to be adapted to my new writing style plus prologue part in my opinion is a little bit miss for my side so I will change it into MC past description. Over all I am glad you see potential in it and I promise to improve my self in future. [img=recommend]
"The final journey in the world of Evola"
Fantasy · Darver_Reaver