For the love of god I hate those Y/N story. I can tolerate some and pretty much the rest I can't, would be excited to see how this will go.
As was requested, I won't follow the original, so many events and interactions would differ, with some OC characters being involved too. (I won't add too many OCs so it won't become a Wattpad-type Y/N story.)
Anime & Comics · Jumbo_Ignir
I can already see what will happen in the future
I shall say another thing, and that would be the fact that Makoto won't be in Emilia's camp nor in the camp of any other royal candidate. Hehe, I don't want to spoil much, so you shall wait for future chaps and men, Fuck this boring arc. I tried to come up with some interesting plot twists and then decided to destroy that shit. I was too blind to follow the canon so much, so I hope you will like the future changes I planned for this fanfiction of mine.
Anime & Comics · Jumbo_Ignir
I like it being called "Two Sword Style" instead, and seriously? "Upstairs"?
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Anime & Comics · GregariousLion
huh? is this intentional or did you mix up the names?
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Anime & Comics · GregariousLion
ok, I really can't immersed myself because of all the things to describe Kuma Ability why did you refer it to 'meatball' of all things. I find it hilarious instead of serious.
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Anime & Comics · GregariousLion
20% dmg boost to Nomu's nice
Zombie Hunter: Increases damage dealt to undead enemies by 20%."
Anime & Comics · TenseiNovels
tsundere~
"Hell if I know...This guy is a dummy...w-well a cute dummy but still a dummy! Hmph!"
Anime & Comics · Jumbo_Ignir
relief*
With those words the boy fell unconscious as Emilia started to heal his wounds.
Anime & Comics · Jumbo_Ignir
shouldn't it be descended
'I d-don't know if it will work but if I am really considered as Ultimate Lucky student than please, my luck, help me out in here!'
Anime & Comics · Jumbo_Ignir
greeted → gritted
"I...gh...c-can't allow myself to die in here…" He clenched his fists as greeted his teeth.
Anime & Comics · Jumbo_Ignir
you shouldn't worry about disappointing us reader's, I might have no experience as a writer but I do have experience on not wanting to disappoint others, as long as you enjoy yourself and be happy I can enjoy your stories.
ch 0 3 Chapter 3: Luck and Return By Death!
Anime & Comics · Jumbo_Ignir
Thanks for the chapter, i notice there are less grammar error and some improvement. The update for each chapter is also amazing.
ch 0 3 Chapter 3: Luck and Return By Death!
Anime & Comics · Jumbo_Ignir
Amazing idea and theory, props to the lad for coming up of something like that.
Olatudobem: His luck, theoretically, should be killing him so that he gets the best possible ending, and doesn't end up as a "What If" route, since most are full of anguish and pain.
Anime & Comics · Jumbo_Ignir
indeed it is.
Cliffhangers are bitches, right?
Anime & Comics · Jumbo_Ignir
It will be amusing when Rem fall in love with Makoto, she will be no doubt a very overprotective mama bear.
The old man himself wanted the boy to stay, he felt an urge to protect the boy like he was protecting Felt.
Anime & Comics · Jumbo_Ignir
Ultimate Lucky Pervert.
By bumping to the person who was going towards the opposite direction they both fell with Makoto groaning in pain.
Anime & Comics · Jumbo_Ignir
Foreshadowing perhaps? I'm interested if Naegi will somehow be like Izuru Kamukura (My Favorite Character) or gained his Ultimate the more he experience the re;zero world.
"I would say you are more talented than you look."
Anime & Comics · Jumbo_Ignir
am iIthe only one who read it as "Ancient Onee-sama"?
"I bid you a fond welcome, Ancient One-sama"
Overlord: Ancient one
Anime & Comics · Clockwork_055