OMG.. is that what this stiff writing is? i knew something was different. i would expect this from someone who is giving us only description of the story and i always felt this is not good enough work to call it a novel experience but i didn't expect it to be AI because i have come across few of similar type of novels which have no dialogue, emotion or depth, and i felt it was because they are new to writing and will improve gradually. AI use for writing novels shouldn't exist imo.
Seated at a desk, pen in hand, Seok-Woo's father diligently worked through the necessary documents, ensuring that every detail was in order. With each signature, the transaction took one step closer to completion.
Anime & Comics · inverted
Never had the Ancient One seen another being that yearned for freedom more than the boy before her. It was as if his whole being couldn't help but gravitate towards this goal no matter the time or circumstances.
Others · GodOfFreedom
OMG... "black hair green eyes" And "hoddie and a thin jacket", you sir are not even trying to be subtle.
Never had the Ancient One seen another being that yearned for freedom more than the boy before her. It was as if his whole being couldn't help but gravitate towards this goal no matter the time or circumstances.
Others · GodOfFreedom
SPOILER ALERT!!! SPOILERS ALERT!!! SPOILER ALERT!!! SPOILERS ALERT!!! I don’t understand this part. Is she still the same lux goddess or are you changing this part? I always am a bit skeptical about this part of the story like I would have thought this was one of heroine of memorizer roe smth. So does this mean he has started with contact with goddess and they are just learning that he is the golden constellation? Because I have always been under impression that they knew that he was the golden constellation but it was just that he was like a double edged sword that could even kill them and have power over them (It was like they feared that they would create a 2nd Kim Soohyun so they were thinking of him like the last resort). And also they definitely knew that he has sent something back in time SPOILER ALERT!!! SPOILERS ALERT!!! SPOILER ALERT!!! SPOILERS ALERT!!!
"Oh my God... it can't be..." she said very softly, an almost imperceptible whisper.
Anime & Comics · Maya_Matengele
This is a major faulty plot. Like he said he dosent forget anything and that he can remember all the books he has read. He said he wants to prolong the start of the war and now here he forgets how the war starts
'Shit, Shit, Shit how could this have escaped me'
Book&Literature · Ghostrider0002
Love the fan-fic, continue uploading and completing this book would be my only request to you. My country doesn’t take payment in patreon so if you want to payment to be motivation for you then I would not complain if it is readable behind the WebNovel paywall.
Hello readers, I know it's been a while, and I completely forgot about this fiction to the extent that I have to reread it myself to start again. Therefore, I've decided to start a Patreon for this story soon, and to continue updating the fiction both publicly and on Patreon. Please give me your thoughts on whether it's worth continuing. Consider Patreon as a way to ensure that the fiction continues without hiatus or being dropped.
Book&Literature · AmouxCreationsX
you should try reading some Chinese novels/fanfics this novel is apparently too original and realistic for you to enjoy.
He showed a rare sign of weakness and sorrow as he spoke "Sometimes I wish you were still here, Elder Brother."
Anime & Comics · Kingkillerdj2023
Snape is nerve treated well in translation novels so I am keeping low expectations for this novel
This fact was evident when Professor Snape taught the Killing Curse, emphasizing that it required a substantial amount of magical power to be lethal.
Anime & Comics · Scaramousse
you can understand the idea the author had for this scene. like it was a good idea but the execution was a bit flawed. no emotions were there so this looked bland and rushed. but otherwise this was a good enough idea.
"Thank you, sister. I will never hate you, because of you, my father is still alive. This is all the Hokage's fault."
Anime & Comics · Devils_hand
I haven't read that fan fic, it has been on my reading list for few months. its just that it is a lengthy fan fic and is still not completely translated. with most of the translated fanfic i only read after its translation is complete or almost near complete.
It's just that there is only one official member of the abyss at present, that is, Yuki Hyōketsu.
Anime & Comics · Iampoorguy
They have also said about this in wiki for "raido namiashi" ; "During his time serving under the Fourth Hokage, he was taught the Flying Thunder Formation Technique, the seal for which they have marked on the Fifth Hokage, so that they can travel to her at any time."
Minato is not a petty person. He even teaches his platoon guard the Flying Thunder God Technique, of course he will also teach Kakashi about it.
Anime & Comics · Iampoorguy
Actually minato did teach others that technique.
Minato is not a petty person. He even teaches his platoon guard the Flying Thunder God Technique, of course he will also teach Kakashi about it.
Anime & Comics · Iampoorguy
my knowledge on that question: the eyes in his arms are suppressed through seals, but that is still too much chakra use because danzo has Mangekyo Sharingan in his right eye (Shisui's Mangekyo) which consumes even more chakra. but it all makes sence when you assume that danzo is a very OP power level from his training under 2nd Hokage, like he was next level strong compared to 3rd hokage but was only not chosen because he had power hungry personality. so in the end he exchanged the his combat power to gain ability to manipulate people (maybe... i mean isn't that what danzo wanted from shisui?) and that resulted in him loosing a lot of his chakra.
Kakashi, who is not an Uchiha family, has a large limitation on using Sharingan. One is that Sharingan cannot be closed, causing it to consume Chakra all the time.
Anime & Comics · Iampoorguy
How about “Merlin”. It sounds cliche but it works. But it would stand out with all the other names in the novel
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i don't mind you putting this on hold but please i have been waiting for tbate fan fic and i would love a consistent and faster update on the other tbate fanfic
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He is making conversation not revealing his secrets
Harry theatrically puffed up his chest and straightened his spine. He titled his head upwards, so the girl could look up his nostrils for added effect. "Why Slytherin of course, the greatest of the Hogwarts four. The unfortunate thing is just that it's not very cunning or helpful to one's political ambitions to be sorted into the house of dark-wizards. Which is where Hufflepuff comes in. You see, nobody suspects the Puff and thus it should be clear that all the real blood-purists and dark wizards are in Hufflepuff. All those in Slytherin are just pretenders, the idiots who'd rather put their blood-purism on display and then having measures taken against it, instead of acting in the shadows and succeeding unimpeded. My great-great-great-grandfather always said that one shouldn't let pride affect your ability to be an effective asshole."
The education of Harry Evans: A death well-lived (Reincarnation)
Book&Literature · Bor902