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ch 23 First Encounter With Monsters

An Extra’s POV

An Extra’s POV

Fantasy · Magecrafter

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'H-His first...' Yume cried inwardly since Mizuto's first time was taken by Akatsuki. 

My Stepsister in Kyoto

My Stepsister in Kyoto

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Chapter 22 I Can't Go On Anymore I found this fanfic 2 years ago and at the time it only had about 50 chapters. I read it until chapter 50. And I really like it. Unfortunately, the script was too small, so I shelved it, and 2 years later, I'm now reading it again. But in the recent past, I've read dozens of Douluo fanfics on both Chinese and English websites. I can say that I know the information so well that I feel like I can write this fanfic. And when I came back to read it, I found many things in this fanfic that irritated me to the point that I couldn't read my favorite fanfic that I had been stuck on for over 2 years. Problem 1) A pair of wuhan or more could be had if they were of a similar level, such as Tang San's Hammer and Grass. His hammer was already top level. And his grass, although it looks ordinary But it had the bloodline of the Blue Grass Emperor. It can be seen as a youthful version of the Blue Grass Emperor. And with a little reinforcement, it can evolve into a Blue Grass Emperor. and BB Dong's The two spiders were also top level, but the MC's had 2 dragons and a normal handkerchief. It's not even close to the same level. And why must there be two dragons? If you were to transform into a giant dragon You will have a lightning dragon on one side and a fire dragon on the other. It doesn't look good at all. If you have 3 Wuhan, you can have 1 beast or powerful creature, 1 weapon, and 1 buff weapon. It looks better than 2 creatures that you have to switch between. Because like BB Dong She used the first Wuhan for climbing and attached the standard ring. And use the second one, attach a 10,000 year ring to show the ultimate power. But two dragons…..sigh. Problem 2) Spirit bones. Why are you in such a hurry to attach 1,000 year old bones? Did you know that once it's stuck it can't be removed? Even if you get it, it's difficult and difficult. And it wasn't necessary. The skills that were attached didn't wow me, and in the future I had to hunt down 100,000-year-olds. Matching bones and rings are better than random bones from nowhere. Problem 3) The story about chicken soup that there is no Wuhan is useless. There are only useless users. When I first heard it I thought it was really good. But when I read a lot of fan fiction, I felt like it was nonsense. It's just chicken soup for fools. Because the Wuhan level is related to the innate spirit level. If it's a type of grass Useless things Most have no spiritual power at all. You can't even begin the path of power. Even though he only had a little spiritual power, Future levels are limited. Unless you're lucky or have enough money to buy fairy grass or something similar. And if you were to choose a god-level Wuhan with full spiritual power that no matter what path you choose to walk on, it would be godly. And Wuhan is useless with only 1 soul power. and must calculate the best route But even the best routes have many limitations. And it only makes it more powerful than similar or mid-level Wuhan.

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When I first saw this novel, I liked it so much that I wanted to read it in one go until the last chapter. It has many elements that I like, such as: Dungeon Master Harem 18+ Knight Dragon It's very interesting. But when I started reading it, it became even more disappointing. Messy and boring The first problem is the goblins. You didn't tell me how many people survived the blood essence enhancement. And you said that Goblin has 3 paths to increase efficiency. But all the ones seen were of the same type. And suddenly in episode 23 you just wrote: The hero sends ordinary goblins who are the descendants of the first goblins to test the monsters. I must say I was very confused, I knew that goblins breed quickly. But it's only been a few chapters and you've barely mentioned the goblins other than sending them out to investigate. Problem 2: The Dragon Warrior. It's level D. But when enhanced to become a Dragon Knight with a flying dragon, it's only D+. The next level of Knight Leader should be C. What will you call the next level? Knight General? Knight General? Knight King? Knight God? I think the level is very low for the word knight. And it's like you're skipping the elite knights as well. Because the archer and mage next to him were of elite level. And as far as I can see you have reached the level of SSS. Problem 3: Hero stories The hero can defeat heroes and see their level of loyalty. But the first female knight the hero meets doesn't defeat him to show her loyalty. But the hero fucked her a few times and trusted her. The hero's personality seems to be at odds with the hero's caution in many stories. Problem number 4: dark lord succubus. She comes to the hero to ask for help, but when she meets him, she flirts with him to control her slaves. But the hero doesn't respond much and thinks the power is interesting. will use it to control the city But what the hero does is not to control her, but to help her. In exchange, let her help you back. We never thought we'd meet a hero this stupid. Problem 5: Immigration. How did the hero get to Hero City? Because when the hero gets close to the dark lord, it will give a warning. But the hero came back in comfortably. And you smoothly reveal in the next chapter that this is a benefit of the limited time pass. And when the hero eats breakfast When I greeted the uncle selling noodles But the uncle whispered about the hero's identity and said that he was also a dark lord. Guys, why is the hero's identity so easily broken? I've only read 31 chapters. But my beautiful dream disappeared and turned into a hopeless, rubbish novel.

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