(continuimg here because I can't edit the review) progress, but then he has them skip multiple levels at once. Not even in a way that makes sense, he just tosses in some BS formation or emotional moment and boom, the characters are now more powerful than anyone around them. This doesn't just happen once but multiple times. It feels like there's no master plan, the author just writes what he's feeling and continues it for 10-20 chapters before he gets bored and skips ahead. Also feels like the author decided to condense 500 chapters of story into 200 chapters just to save time. There's a system as well, but truthfully the book would be better without it. It adds pretty much nothing of value to the story, and you forget it exists until it gives the MC overpowered abilities that don't at all fit into the world. Totally ruins an honesrly good magic progression system. There's a lot more to be said but honestly, I recommend skipping this book until the author does a re-write. I read about 300 chapters (up until it got realllyyy bad). If you're horny, just flip through for the R-18 stuff and skip the rest.
Fantasy · MotivatedSloth
Book starts off really strong, but it fizzles fast. It feels like the first ~50 chapters were edited and then the author stopped fixing minor grammatical errors. Character wakes up in his new world with lots of questions and we expect answers, but then he just never asks anything, so we're extremely short on world-building and even shorter on any semblance of a logical progression of events. MC "drops to his knees" dramatically like 1x every 5 chapters for a while? Some basic things that could be fixed and would help a ton. Progression-wise, the author sets up a decent magic system and sets the stage for our characters to progress,
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(continuimg here because I can't edit the review) progress, but then he has them skip multiple levels at once. Not even in a way that makes sense, he just tosses in some BS formation or emotional moment and boom, the characters are now more powerful than anyone around them. This doesn't just happen once but multiple times. It feels like there's no master plan, the author just writes what he's feeling and continues it for 10-20 chapters before he gets bored and skips ahead. Also feels like the author decided to condense 500 chapters of story into 200 chapters just to save time. There's a system as well, but truthfully the book would be better without it. It adds pretty much nothing of value to the story, and you forget it exists until it gives the MC overpowered abilities that don't at all fit into the world. Totally ruins an honesrly good magic progression system. There's a lot more to be said but honestly, I recommend skipping this book until the author does a re-write. I read about 300 chapters (up until it got realllyyy bad). If you're horny, just flip through for the R-18 stuff and skip the rest.
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Fantasy · MotivatedSloth