Samuel_Calegnan - Profile

I understand, I didn't saw when the fanfic was posted but that certaintly makes a difference on how I see it now. Still, with my vision of the character now, and with the idea that this would happen some months/years in the future I can't help but still think that he wouldn't swear as much. But in the end I can still appreciate the work and respect your take on the character, I was only hoping to give some constructive criticism.

My only complain is that Grid curses way to much, at the 1400s he has already stopped and rarely does it. While I get that the situations he is facing are extreme, I think the curses should be left for more impactfull moments instead of being used in every single circunstance.