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ch 0 3 Chapter 3: New Life
The Worst Marine
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Chapters should come out, every other day, from now on.
ch 0 5 Chapter 5: First Day Of Class
MHA: Reality Of Those With Nothing
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You're right, I meant to write Negi( The sound Ninja ) Instead of Nanako, I have a key bind that groups Nanako and Mimiko together, and I wrote this chapter late, so I forgot about it.
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I was writing one of the newer chapters, and I thought I should be more precise with this explanation, One can be willingly teleported, or forcefully teleported, if their curse energy doesn't equal Mute's or Yuta's. That's why at the beginning of the story, Mute was able to teleport others into his palm.
One's body can be teleported, if the recipient wishes for their body to be transported. But even with Yuki's body being transported, Mute had plenty of time to react to her movements, however, her fist couldn't be stopped by Mute's technique.
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Gotcha, then in that case you would be correct. But truthfully, I made Yuta use his domain expansion with Yuki, so I didn’t have to describe what it looked like. Because if I described what it looked like and In a few chapters Gege makes Yuta use his domain against Sukuna and it’s complete different . It’ll make this chapter look dumb.
ch 119 Chapter 119: Battle For New Strongest.
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Wouldn’t of worked due to Mute’s binding vow, that overrides any domain after he survives the one minute. But if Mute had a normal domain this would of worked
ch 119 Chapter 119: Battle For New Strongest.
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P:S I'm hoping you can figure out why this is, but if you can't I'll tell you, or if someone gets it right, I'll like their comment.
" Ah, a minute passed that quickly. For some reason, that felt faster than usual. But oh well, Domain Expansion: An Act Of Vitality "
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You're correct, that is how it works, but I'll explain how she or they are using the technique on Mute's physical body next chapter.
Purple light admitted out the powerful orb of energy, illuminating the barren road filled with floating arrows, Mute stared up at the purple orb watching Rika materialize next to the descending Yuta, Mute was about to dash back out of the range of the attack until suddenly the gravity around his body increased ten fold causing his legs to bend. Mute glanced to the left staring at Yuki who was pointing at him until she suddenly grinned and the sound of screaming air entered Mute's ears.
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Me after writing this chapter, also let me know if there are any grammar issues.
ch 119 Chapter 119: Battle For New Strongest.
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It more of a caution poster saying there is someone destroying towns, but wanted posters sounded better than caution posters in my opinion
ch 0 3 Chapter 3: Bastardly
The Odd World Of Pokémon
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P:S Let me know if there are any grammar issues
ch 0 3 Chapter 3: Bastardly
The Odd World Of Pokémon
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P:S Let me know if there are any grammar issues.
ch 0 2 Chapter 3: Final Chance
The Odd World Of Pokémon
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Mute is a year older but still around the same age
ch 118 Chapter 118: Sealing
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Tell people about the deal.
Mai pondered, thinking about the bonding vow Mute had just offered her before she let out an eerie grin and nodded agreeing to the conditions of the vow. After seeing Mai nod her head, Mute just grinned and extended his hand out grabbing onto Mai's shoulder before he spoke.
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Sorry for the slow start but the novel will speed up from here
ch 0 6 Chapter 6: Otherworldly
Assassin Straight
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I'm going to have to explain a lot of things next chapter, so I apologize if the chapter takes a little longer to come out.
ch 104 Chapter 104: Pinnacle Of Sorcery
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They are posted on Webnovel currently.
P:S Sorry for the lack of chapters. I have been busy with life and writing other novels. For some reason, I'm finding the other novels are far harder to write compared to this one. But I guess it's because JJK's story is more simplistic. But anyway, I hope you have enjoyed this novel, let me know if you have any questions or if you see any grammar mistakes.
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