Shivani_Sachdeva_9760

Shivani_Sachdeva_9760

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2021-06-25 Joined Global
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Shivani_Sachdeva_9760
Shivani_Sachdeva_9760
6 months ago
Commented

It was a beautiful story which ended with so much love. Wishing you good luck for your upcoming endevours❤️

Shivani_Sachdeva_9760
Shivani_Sachdeva_9760
7 months ago
Replied to Tres_Aguila

❤️

Shivani_Sachdeva_9760
Shivani_Sachdeva_9760
7 months ago
Commented

Seat here has become eat😑

From the corner of his eyes, he glanced at General Li who was sitting on his eat without any expression. He could imagine in his mind how the old General was raging behind that calm face.

His Rui

His Rui

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Shivani_Sachdeva_9760
Shivani_Sachdeva_9760
7 months ago
Commented

It should be ear not hear[img=Fuming] very upsetting grammatical mistakes everywhere.. disrupts the reading flow

Blowing warm breath in her hear, he said seductively

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History · Ada_5253

Shivani_Sachdeva_9760
Shivani_Sachdeva_9760
7 months ago
Commented

Wrong grammar incorrect sentence makes no sense

Zhao Zhang Wei didn't dislike it. That moment, Yi Huiqing would be in front of him without any cover. Her eyes would be bright when she would get angry, her cheek would go red. All of this would make him so entrance that he would not be able to remove his eyes away from her.

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His Rui

History · Ada_5253

Shivani_Sachdeva_9760
Shivani_Sachdeva_9760
7 months ago
Commented

Oh My goodness thank you Henry is back.. this just brings the story to a complete circle.. am so happy... Kudos to the author for giving us such an awesome read❤️❤️

Shivani_Sachdeva_9760
Shivani_Sachdeva_9760
7 months ago
Commented

Grammatical error

With these words, he removed his palm from the man's forehead and disappeared from the room the next moment...as of he was never there

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History · Ada_5253

Shivani_Sachdeva_9760
Shivani_Sachdeva_9760
8 months ago
Commented

Very very heartening if Henry is really dead and that too to phycho Sebastian😞😞 🤞 hoping for a good twist that ends in a happy ever after..

Shivani_Sachdeva_9760
Shivani_Sachdeva_9760
8 months ago
Commented

Why is he mentioned every where instead of she pls correct the major grammatical error. Its very confusing and also upsetting while reading.

Pop eagerly put down the bottle, almost drooling on his chin, but seeing his mom didn't intend to feed him.

The Amazing Strike Back: Mommy Wants To Revenge!

The Amazing Strike Back: Mommy Wants To Revenge!

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Shivani_Sachdeva_9760
Shivani_Sachdeva_9760
8 months ago
Commented

OMG! I hope Henry survives this ordeal and gives a befitting reply to Sebastian😞