I indeed planning to read your other works. Thank you!
Since they were close before, Avery still respected him and communicated with him patiently. However, she didn't like what Meyer did because he totally changed. She can't believe Charles will do disgusting things.
Urban · AnnaShannel_Lin
Yes, I completely agree with this and fully accept what Avery feels or does. Unfortunately as a reader after 700+ chapters, we get to see Evan's change, his regret, his pain and him trying to redeem himself. Even though Avery has suffered so much, we did not get to feel all that along with her but just know she did suffer, but with Evan we are through out with him during his journey of transforming from bad to good and see him trying his best to try to compensate and get her forgiveness but all we get to see her unyielding stubbornness. So in a way it makes us feel Avery is being unfair to Evan when compared to others. Also may be because he is the ML, we have more soft spot for him :). Thank you for responding, I would like to thank you for this wonderful story. I really appreciate your work and kindly ignore any of my ignorant or rude comments, if there are any, in previous chapters. If you are offended by any of my previous comments I would like to apologize. I was not being critical of your writing but more to do with being anguished due to the way things turn out in the story. All just proves how immersed I got with the story! Keep up the good work [img=recommend]
Since they were close before, Avery still respected him and communicated with him patiently. However, she didn't like what Meyer did because he totally changed. She can't believe Charles will do disgusting things.
Urban · AnnaShannel_Lin
It's surprising the to see the difference in Avery's hatred towards Charles and Evan when she knows they did something wrong. Her hatred for Evan is exponential but for anyone including Charles she is isn't as tough as she would be with Evan. She might be aware that Evan might not do things to hurt her intentionally but others are intentional but still it is easy for her to be understanding of others but not Evan. Is it because Evan is the one she loves and has high expectations and is more hurt because of that when he fails to meet those expectations? Even if that is the case, it still hurts to see her forgiving others easily and not that averse to them but hates Evan extremely even if she knows the reason for him doing those mistakes
Since they were close before, Avery still respected him and communicated with him patiently. However, she didn't like what Meyer did because he totally changed. She can't believe Charles will do disgusting things.
Urban · AnnaShannel_Lin
Basketball bat? or it actually is baseball bat?
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Urban · AnnaShannel_Lin
I share your sentiments too..!
"Let her go," Avery said. It would be meaningless to take her away, Diana had been so miserable now.
Urban · AnnaShannel_Lin
What happened to that bodyguard?
"Have he eaten? Very good. I once let a bodyguard cheat Evan, but failed. This time, I must seize the opportunity, let Evan take medicine for seven days, and then he must love me," thought Diana.
Urban · AnnaShannel_Lin
Evan, you always miss the right chance man. What is your reason to refuse in helping Avery? That you want her to forget all about 'Evan' and love 'George'? Because of you, Avery would be indebted to Mr. Black!
Avery tried not to laugh. Last night, she called him asking for help. So Mr. Black wore female clothes, which made him look cuter.
Urban · AnnaShannel_Lin
So, no one is going to investigate how Molly got hold of Little Princess from the Presidential place? Certainly there is some insider.
Sarah held the little Princess in her arms and went downstairs, followed by two bodyguards. Last night, the Presidential Palace was in alarm. According to the order from Mr. President, two bodyguards came to protect the little Princess and be with her all the time.
Urban · AnnaShannel_Lin
She was tough from the very beginning. Only difference is now she has a strong backup and no more a mere humble peasant. When she had no one to support her or help her, you've tortured her enough without respecting her wishes.
But the woman was so tough that she would do everything she could to stay away from him.
Urban · AnnaShannel_Lin
Well all of you men in this story do think all the women you meet belong to brothel who can be used and tossed away until you figure out you love that person. Even after you fall in love with that person, your treatment of her as a human being and her own personality is marginal. You will still lock her up, rape her, beat her and abuse her mentally and physically.
Mr. Black couldn't help twitching his mouth. Did Molly think it was a brothel of men? She could pick and select. Did she want to change favors too?
Urban · AnnaShannel_Lin
Unloyal? Woman make up your mind! You've decided to break all ties with Evan and move on. How is that called unloyal?
"Avery Peters, how could you be? You love Evan Howel. How can you pay attention to Mr. Lautner?" Avery thought to herself. She was frantic for having such an unloyal thought.
Urban · AnnaShannel_Lin
He is not your friend baby. Just wait for few more suspense's
Avery didn't know what she should say. She was touched. Although Mr. Black was a new friend to her and fundamentally speaking, Mr. Black didn't have to risk her.
Urban · AnnaShannel_Lin
Yay!!! That's more like it. Way to go Avery!!!!
Then she grabbed Mr. Black and hit him as hard as he could, "Where is the key? Give me the key! Give it to me!"
Urban · AnnaShannel_Lin
Is she a commodity? oops, sorry. I forgot that she is.
Then he smiled and said, "If you feel sorry about it, let me marry Avery. You're choosing a husband for her anyway."
Urban · AnnaShannel_Lin
Exactly!
Marriage was so casual these days?
Urban · AnnaShannel_Lin
The word 'mischief' is so inappropriate here! God I hate Mr. Blank
Mr. Black gloated more. He grinned for his mischief worked, "It's okay. Don't mind me. You can go ahead and dance."
Urban · AnnaShannel_Lin
Just tell him dude!
Robert was thinking about what to do if Evan knew his invitation was lost.
Urban · AnnaShannel_Lin
She is such a brazen woman! Outrageously shameless
Diana has gone to the living room and picked up the invitation letter on the coffee table.
Urban · AnnaShannel_Lin
Again, why are Evan's people so useless. How can what he plans in secret can get leaked so easily? How are maids in the Howel mansion get so much information with such ease? maids do gossip but why do they get info as if they are some spies? They could apply for a spy job rather than a maid job.
No? That was not possible. Diana overheard from the maids that Evan ordered a room here.
Urban · AnnaShannel_Lin
Overall, I love this story. There is a lot of heartache, angst, mystery and betrayal along with love. Only complaint- I have finished reading this story and have paid for every chapter. I came back for a revisit and see the chapters are locked again. Why am I seeing the chapters locked after I completed the story?
Billionaire Defiant Wife
Urban · AnnaShannel_Lin