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Brother pleasw be a bit more elaborate about timelines in each chapter

Thank you for clearing the misunderstanding.

A question, till which chapter will his facade of using people around him remain for?

I did not understand this chapter bruh

So far 2 chapters and i think it is going in a direction where MC will let them experience all the horrors that he saved them from? Right? This should be peak satisfaction novel if so

This concept actually looks interesting, really looking forward to the development of this novel brother, Best of Luck.

True but it still feels too forced in order to create a twist, does not feel natural and even most of it is predictable, although some chapters make my heart race it still lets you down a lot of the times

I see thank you for the ans

@ satan a mass release ples

Whats up with these side character deep stories?

Yes, i suggest you keep it a bit more hidden as it gets revealed in the further chapters of the story, similar to Authors Pov, Prompts like transmigration into the novel, how his previous life would catch up to him, the summary has just too much rn which confuses the reader and makes him loose interest. I would suggest being a bit more secretive with it. Rest is uo to your brother, and in the further chapter when it is revealed that he still recalls major events of the novel after it is revealed that it was actually not a novel but james memories of the past puppets hes controlled would be a better refe rence

If you have acess to the further chap can you spoil me a bit if that is the case?

Honestly bro, the summary given on the novel doesn’t do this novel justice, i suggest you change summary i am sure it will gain much more attention, because of that similar reason this was catching dust in my library cuz i liked the genre so iadded it to the library

Finally getting a bit spicy 🌶️ Best of luck with further works authro, no more money