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The Titel is right so no need to worry about that. While I only read the first 4 chapters of it since back then it only had 4 and I didn't have time since then to read the rest, I think it does have potential but depents on how author is going to write the rest of it 4 chapters is not enough for me to give a review right now.

Yes, in generall a nice idea. But from what whe learned until now worldbosses should not have the ability to attack in a dungeon, except some special circumstances that were not nearer explained. They seem to be able to go outside the dungeon though, and the fifth floor where they life seems to become some sort of quest floor once there is one.

Yeah, you are right there are a lot of other mythical snakes. but to be true I always hope that there are not to many mythical snakes and that they only are there for reverence. We already have storys about them after all. Some short, some long but in generall we know about them. So new mythical snakes that are unknown are appreciated. Of course names can be taken from already existing ones if they match each other more than 90%. But other mythical snakes like ouroboros usw. would also Sure make a nice Addition. I am also interested about the 'common' snakes. Since they could also become pretty nice. For this we can go to the more normal snakes that we once even had on the planed like ancient titanoboa usw. but I really hope some titanoboa species will be added.

It is interesting, the Experiment(s) need mc to put in research in reallife too so it nicely involves the realworld to the game, besides the money. Also maybe some people like me learn something new, while I knew that plats grow to the sun, I didn't know that the roots would grow to the nutrients. But if you think about it a little bit it makes a lot of sense, and oh no "baby snakey" in egg is dead. while it should still work, I am a little interested how. Since the extracted gene essence from the machine is still there but the egg while having essence, I don't think it is developed enough. The only thing I can think about is that since normal snakes have 3 essence, egal have less but since no life grew in them they can be completely harvested. Of course there are probably some other things then or players could just go and snatch eggs and get the essence from it, and then be something like a Mini dungeon master.

ok, I only know it as a dragon from norse mythology. So I just looked it up again just in case and also found two Versions. One where it is descriebed as a dragon that looks snake like and the other as a snake. But I only found very little that described it as a snake most described it as a snake like dragon. Wikipedia was one of the dragon one, and on a side like mythologysource it is described as a snake. Well overall I don't think this Experiment will bring out something like niddhog, but it is not impossible considering, that the worldtree, poisonous snakes and a lot of poison is used in the Experiment. But at the same time it is unlikely because of the worldtree itself, nidhogg after all eats on the world tree it is not Part of it.

Wasn't niddhogg a dragon?

No, the story is still good. But your break propably made some people also make a break for some time. I also didn't have any time for the last 2 days so could only read the new 3 now. Another thing is that it is obviously nice to read a bunch of them after each other than waiting for 1 chapter each time. So some will Stock the chapters up and only unlock them. I didn't see any quality drop from the story itself. Especially now where the Experiment that he did so long begins to take shape it is more of a high point in the chapters. I also personaly still read them normally 1 chapter at a time when it comes out since I can't wait. As for why less people read, idk do they? I can't See als statistics so it is relatively hard. There is also the fact that a novel generally gets only less people over time who continue it in comparison to the first chapters since a lot of them Jump off on the way, like for example when 100 people read the first 25 chapters maybe only 99 people read the 26th chapter. Then obviously there will come new readers who will read until the newest (I was such an example since I only started reading as this book already had over 100 chapters) but it won't change the fact that it is still this one guy less than the early chapters. (especially the ones that are for free) So don't get down by it and keep going. like you said author san creation is hard. So obviously it is impossible to make it perfect for everyone. Make what you think would be best for the story and just go with it. I don't know about others but you will defenetely have my mental Support.

like it, ther is not really anything to dislike, while I am still waiting for the chapter where skills, cooldowns usw. in liberty are explained. As for like, it is nice to see Dhruvs growth, it is also nice seeing him blend in more in his Role as a commander ingame, his skill also explains to a large extend why he is so intelligent and mature at his age. I think the best things are to see how he slowly changes completely giving up his parts of being a young child. It is hard to say about strategy, since I never learned about that, but many things like how the leader often are not skilled in leadership and only popular makes a lot of sense to me. (in reallife the advisors after all did most of the thinking in wars) Overall it is a nice chapter, what whe are lacking is currently a lot of Information of the Flame guild. Since all we know is that they are a guild who believes in a god, has a lot of aoe dmg, is pretty strong and did well in his last life. For the attack currently we only know that they are weakening the City through nobles and will attack while other Part of the clan attack other cities. So it is fairly limited. But overall a good extra chapter.

I already but my thoughts of "villain in making" in discord so won't do it again here. For all the People that didn't read author notes at the end of the chapter and only comments. Villain in making is another book of the author where he currently has 4 chapters released. Take a look at it, and give some opinion if you have time.

The Mistakes do not apply to ingame choices. It is about his personality and choices in reallife. Of course he is going to take care of all his pastlife mistakes, but this doesn't change him as a Person. Like I said those mistakes are just Part of the character improvement of mc and will have a truningpoint while still being in the free to read chapters. Afterall if you ask me a loser in his past life can't suddenly Become some op guy in his next life. Besides why it is possible by most is because they where either op in the past life or it is like they started completely from the beginning and were just ahead from others so that they just became arrogant and nothing else, but that makes sense afterall they are on the top there. Mc here start a year later than others. He is basically lvl 1 in the game vs lvl 100+ people who all control territory and in real life a Person who was besten up all his life. Where should his mentality growth come from if not from mistakes. While there was not really a very big mistake, but they accumulated and helped him change his mindset. To be true this may even be the scene that I likes the most in the whole novel.

Thank you for the chapter, and author you made a little mistake. When Grave things that Vize used up somuch mana for 6 uses but he only used the skill 5 times not 6. Sry can't pinpoint the exact line with my phone, it is near the end.

The story is to be true really great, for me at the least. You can say the story pacing is medium not very slow but also not very fast, but you need to see it more like 3 storys in one. Since author is basically doing 3 worlds. The real world, the dungeon and the gameworld outside of the dungeon. While all 3 are interconnected, but since it is 3 even thought we have 148 chapters without privilege as of now you will need to think more like 50 chapters for each Part. The author makes it quite good though. The Actions of the mc also make sense, and he and other supporting characters have a pretty nice growth (I don't mean acquisition of strength but personality wise). Especially important is this for mc since he makes quite a few mistakes in the early chapters. I also made a review to this novel which describes what is good and Bad about the novel, though it is hard for me to pick Bad things since it is really nicely written. Take a look at it if you want, though it is pretty long. A lot of people seem to have problems with the grammar though. I can't really say anything to that since most of the time I read mtl novels, so for me the grammar is pretty good. Well maybe give it another try?