Albedo_Dazai - Profile

I will go honest I read all 10 chapters and it was a good one You need to work on the writing quality a little, You need fix the grammar a little. I suggest you to describe the surrounding rather as you describe the chapters. Fights are good, I like when fight of the bear, its like you guys not relied on the 2nd mc but on the whole fight of Roy its like he overpowering so its kinds weird. So I aspect more improve in future your story is good but need more work on it and try to write fast. Cuz like we reader have to w8 more then 5 days for 2 chapters so at least realize more then 30 chapter then slow down and at last Story Development is good.

i gave shameless 5 Absolutely love this story, 10/10 The author is creative and a good writer, The character development is great and i love the the King Good luck