Thank you for believing in me, I will improve :D
Oh, so it is different than in Spanish, I will need to change quite a lot, but I will be able to do it. This was something that was really eating me up from the inside, haha!
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Sci-fi · Esoj_Vi_Aifos
Done, thank you for the recommendation, the words really flew under my radar :T
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Sci-fi · Esoj_Vi_Aifos
I have Grammarly :T
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Sci-fi · Esoj_Vi_Aifos
Oh god, you can't end it like that, I need more!!! D:
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Teen · Nakasuka
Something happens here with the writing, read it, it looks like the draft is still in place and made a little mess :)
Take care of Luca," Venera said to Dan. instructed Dan to take care of Luca, while she was gone and for the 10 to be careful with fieldwork while she was gone, as she wouldn't be there to patch them up. She left her scientific journal to her brother and told him to use it to treat the 10 while she was gone by following the instructions in the journal.
Urban · Oracle_Myth
Woah woah woah! Hold on mate, she is human, let her process the whole thing, she is a civilian, not a soldier, even if she is in an anarchist cell!
"You will need to make the prince fall in love with you, Venera," Dan declared. "You will need to stay there as long as possible. If you can convince him to become the princess, getting rid of the king and the chips would be easier than we ever imagined," he said hopefully.
Urban · Oracle_Myth
Lol, I didn't think of that xD
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Sci-fi · Esoj_Vi_Aifos
Thank you very much :D
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Sci-fi · Esoj_Vi_Aifos
Thank you so much for the review Nakasuka! Glad you like my little space opera! :D
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