Moments 14
Really interesting bit about how Findors never return to a place. I feel like this will become an important metaphor in the piece. The talking to himself, the drinking, the self-doubt and criticism - it's clear: Zane's in love.
ch 10 Chapter 10: Unwanted Emotions
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Fantasy · Emily Dinova
Great line
And so isolation became his drug of choice.
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Fantasy · Emily Dinova
Foreshadowing?? Is Sera's mom an owl type creature in disguise too!?
Sera’s mother was a night owl in the most extreme sense, she kept especially strange hours in her older age. Now that their wealth was secured, Hestia turned her attention to other personal matters…
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Fantasy · Emily Dinova
Firstly, I hope everyone is appreciating the awesome irony that Zane is a water dwelling monster and he opened up a diner named Fish n Chips. Genius. Secondly, this Lonny character at the end - I smell a love triangle on our hands!
ch 0 6 Chapter 6: Sundaes & Secrets
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Fantasy · Emily Dinova
This may very end up being my favorite line of the entire piece.
“Best thing about being human. Actually, the only good thing about being human.”
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Fantasy · Emily Dinova
Sera has moxie! She's curious and she doesn't back down - even when she backs herself into a corner. Strong character!
ch 0 4 Chapter 4: First Contact
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Fantasy · Emily Dinova
Customers are "monsters" - I see what you did there =-)
“Zane’s not all that bad. Just miserable like the rest of us trying to scrap a living. It doesn’t help when our customers are absolute monsters.”
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Fantasy · Emily Dinova
If someone told me to overcook their steak - I too would break out my claws. #TeamZane
ch 0 3 Chapter 3: Monster Beneath
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Fantasy · Emily Dinova
Taking a step back from chapter 1, this is a really nice and calm introduction into the world and the character of Sera. She is an intriguing one! Already wondering where she fits into all of this. The author does a really good job slowing down the pace but only for a moment because that chapter ending...
ch 0 2 Chapter 2: Sera's Dilemma
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Fantasy · Emily Dinova
Wow! What an opening chapter! Hooked me right in!!
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: Cursed
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Fantasy · Emily Dinova
one of the best web novels I've read. Great character development. great writing. great structure. I hope this story continues for a long time. Emily Dinova is a promising young author!
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Fantasy · Emily Dinova