you could make the first experienced he has with each girl a smut chapter like this and then just focus on the plot then have then flirt and kiss in some escenes,i agree that 15% its okey and if the smut its like this then im happy, you wrote nice nsfw (petition to have duplicate with him on the shower, who is with me?)
Moving on to more pressing matters, NSFW. I've read many of your comments, messages, and suggestions. This is my first attempt in that area, and it was certainly difficult. This scene took me a lot of time to write, more than making an average chapter. So, I've decided to change that 40% to 10% or 15%, as it seems that the vast majority of you are here for the plot rather than the smut.
Anime & Comics · EmmaCruzader
cap
"Eirikyr Anderson, the Eternal Ruler, the singular across the multiverse. You have been chosen."
Anime & Comics · Marveller
"Holy schmoly!" Alex busted inside of her throat and Mitsuki gulped it all up.
Anime & Comics · B00BIES_for_life
* Ratata intensifies *
"Boy toy? I have a great idea Ryuko, why don't you be a dear and play with us?" Rumi licked her lips and Ryuko shuddered.
Anime & Comics · B00BIES_for_life
oh god for a moment i read that he SHANKed him and i laughed a little too hard
"Otherwise, my name is Jeff and..." before he could continue, I shrank him with the crystals attached to my flashlight.
Anime & Comics · Herohero
the moment dipper steps into the boiling isles its over for belos
I do want to beat Bill Cipher and dominate this universe, but there are huge gray areas in the "Gravity Falls" universe like the Axolotl and not to mention the theories of some randoms who say that this place is connected to "Rick and Morty" or even Amphibia and The Owl House.
Anime & Comics · Herohero
*laughs in 150k views*
"I can't wait to meet Uncle Stan, I really need to go to the bathroom," Mabel said with a red face.
Anime & Comics · Herohero
i hope he makes a Flood Phenomenom
Little did Peter know who this day would change his life even more then ever.
Anime & Comics · Othniel_Seth
im with everyone on this, do whatever makes you more comfortable tho if you want to now i did feel the difference and it was a nice surprise to read everything in one go
Author's Thoughts: 3200 Words. Do you like big chapters like that, or would you prefer me to break it in two and make two chapters?
Anime & Comics · MaliciousPrince
Speaking of Dorea, the teenager was practically a copy of Narcissa, both in mannerisms and in her innate arrogance. Asterion didn't sense any trace of negative magical energy in the girl, which meant she didn't practice the Simplified Inherent Technique of the Black family, but rather the Inherent Technique of the Malfoy family – [The Wheel of Fortune].
Anime & Comics · MaliciousPrince
the fact that half of Rimuru army has conceptual abilities its both funny and scary
Chapter 9 - Headhunting Maid In Another World
Anime & Comics · Daoist_KittyKat
was it in the "magic was really far too convenient in that regard" part?
Merged two chapters for you guys, I wonder if you can tell where the chapters merged.
Anime & Comics · IHaveHidden
fortuna best matchmaker
I could only chalk it up to a lucky coincidence. I knew exactly what that implied but I was not sure why her being there was that important for me. Sure I was being a moody little shit but I was not falling into a fugue. I was in no danger of succumbing to those light emotions. I was not that fragile. Or I was no longer that fragile.
Anime & Comics · IHaveHidden
nice
[Name: Gordak] (image)
Anime & Comics · Shadow_D_Monarch3
nice, it seem narcissa its contemplating things
We started to leave the lake exchanging quips and barbs. The small smile gracing her face told me my efforts were noted and appreciated. I was glad to be in her company again.
Anime & Comics · IHaveHidden
an earth spirit for defense i would say
[Suggests Dad spirit here]
Anime & Comics · Shadow_D_Monarch3
something like the berserk from fate would be cool
[Suggests sister spirits here]
Anime & Comics · Shadow_D_Monarch3
you could make a novel tittle apart and have snippets as some authors do, write the smut that you want and the viewers can give feedback
I'll probably do some omakes or canon side-stories with more NSFW scenes just for practice, but those will be optional if I think they're not good enough to be in the official chapters. Quality over quantity, I suppose.
Almost Invincible (Invincible SI)
Anime & Comics · EmmaCruzader