I like the developments, I love how they talked about there feelings and you didn't resort to the misunderstanding bs(F that noise) So I guess that Naruto will pass the training then leave the ambu before the chunin exams?
ch 62 Chapter no.62 Questions and Answers?!
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Finally a Naruto fic that actually tries to improve the characters and not white wash them or flip the script entirely
ch 61 Chapter no.61 Dragon's Coded Messages
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Become a devil, he could also branch into a demonic angel in later chapters
ch 27 Race Change poll
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Lemons?
So is his eyes healing or is it that his soul powers evolved to see body shapes? Confused
ch 66 Interrupting has its consequences
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Wobble baby wobble baby wobble baby wobble
ch 62 A revelation
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Thats what I'm wondering
Naturally, but in this case it was literally two people, so you only need to use it every once in while. Even with multiple people talking, you don't need to use, says/said, you can use the context.
ch 62 Existential Crisis
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I don't know if it's a new editor or if it's that you're trying a new writing style but the constant use of I said or she says is completely unnecessary. you can assume who's talking based off of context alone
ch 62 Existential Crisis
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How strong is the G.o.d.
ch 61 Gift Between Friends
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Oh 馃様 oh well cool
Became Hitler
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