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Is there romance, I'm curious 🤔

It was an interesting fic I read it on Ao3 (same author) a d it was interesting but he had a challenge managing the down time between the events, and if you compare his other stories to this one, you can tell he has gotten better. This was complete late 2023, so it's not new on Ao3. If you are interested in a op harry with decent writing, I would recommend. Although there was a little Yuri because one of his harem members were a couple before meeting Harry but yeah, it was good 👍🏾.

I thought the Chinese was like 100+ by now (like how all chinese fanfic authors are) Is the romance bad or is it bland?

That's cool, will you add lemons ? And what's the upload schedule, if you push until you pass this novel you could gain more readers ¯⁠\⁠_⁠(⁠ ͡⁠°⁠ ͜⁠ʖ⁠ ͡⁠°⁠)⁠_⁠/⁠¯

Dumb, but very interesting and entertaining. The MC gives off the "for the boys" vibes, I like the change to the Naruto system, I want to see how far this will go. will the motivations of some characters change? how will the new system affect combat? Honestly just waiting for a backlog so I can binge read. I can't wait to see how the author makes the Naruto story his own.

You forgot that Gods exist in dxd, what one measly little human with some arbitrary power going to do?

Nope, think of it like "Unheard Wishes: A Tale of Desires" by Over_The_Moon69, there is smut but the mc still needs to master his powers, just that he has no by threats yet, so nothing is happening and for now it's mostly drama and feelings.

This does not deserve to be in the 3 - 4 range, this atleast deserves a 4.5 or even 4.8. The writing style is great The grammar is natural and reads like a native speaker There is tension and suspense There is world-building (which is what people are getting confused about - basically, MC was reborn in dxd because his past gf was a god so he got some of Anubis powers in the form of a system). Its not a complete wish fulfilment with crappy pacing. You need to read and focus in order to understand. The author is being creative, I don't know why people p*ssed when the author is trying something new. TLDR: this fic needs some love, it doesn't have the quality nor should it have the rating of a third-rate wishfulfilment dxd fic 🔥

So far it's been a great Naruto World building fanfiction and I can see the author is trying to make a very logical fanfiction. But, 30 chapters in and he's still explain the intricacies of the Hugo Clan so not much can be said...🤷‍♂️ It's well written though, and it's not as boring as you might think 🤔