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I haven't read the story yet, I just want to say. You can ignore it, since you are the author, but I would advise you not to prescribe the relationships of minor characters in such detail. Firstly, you are writing a harem, and the relationship of MC with each girl will need to be prescribed at least a little. It would be better to pay attention to them, because in harem stories, paying attention to the relationships of minor characters will always be to the detriment of the relationship of MC. Secondly, most readers, especially about the harem, are not very interested in reading about the relationship of someone else, except MC. In addition, many readers have preferences in female characters, and if the mention that the girl is not with MC, the reaction will be normal, then many people may not like the details (personally, I'm just not interested in reading about the life of someone else other than MC (rare interludes are quite normal)). Thirdly, specifically in the case of Vali, he seems to be a fighting maniac, so in theory he should not pay attention to the relationship. Although here you can already register the characters as you like, so it's not so important

Lavinia Reni. I will not be adding her to the harem as I want to ship her with Vali. Vali will play a pretty big role along with some other male characters as rivals and allies for Sharon Savant. As such, I want them to have a fleshed out life with their own power increases, relationships, and so on. As such, Lavinia Reni will not be included.

Dragon of Absolute Sovereignty (DXD)

Dragon of Absolute Sovereignty (DXD)

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So that's why the tea situation seemed familiar to me) Xavier's reaction and name MC reminded. I recently read a Chinese Marvel ff, which was just recommended in response to your request in another work. You were probably inspired by it) And no, it's not a reproach or something, just noticed. I can say based on your other works that the story will be good. Therefore, I hope you will not abandon it and will update it often.

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There aren't many chapters to say anything specific, but so far I like it. I hope for frequent updates.

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I was already strong as an individual and I had a substantial military of my own in the form of Eris's main body, Partner, and the various sentinels that were being produced even now. In the worst-case scenario, I could just go nuclear and get enough World Points by ruining this kingdom and maybe the entire continent by offing the nobles and royals that piss me off.

This isn't High School DxD, damn it!

This isn't High School DxD, damn it!

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