Alexeymoded

Спасибо за главу

Don't be so self-critical. I genuinely like this fanfic. It's one of the best fanfics featuring the character Lappland. I'm also okay with AI. For me, the idea itself is more important than whose help it was realized with (otherwise, the idea wouldn't be realized at all). I (and I think other readers) are glad that you're not abandoning this fanfic at all. Good luck at work and in your personal life.

Thanks for the chapter. But it feels like an AI is writing it. The chapters have become even more drawn-out (a lot of empty text). It feels like the plot has stalled and nothing is happening. At first, I was very happy with this narrative approach, as it allows for more attention to be paid to the characters and their surroundings. But then you catch yourself thinking (especially noticeable if you're reading in ongoing mode) that very little has happened in the entire chapter, and those that do are almost a repeat of what happened in the previous chapter, but with slightly different words and little development. I'm currently working on over 100 chapters, but in the fanfic, it's been, hopefully, two weeks (one week went by faster). At this rate, by chapter 1000, Lappland will be entering the academy (if the plot continues in that direction). This is by no means a negative review. I still think the author has done a great job of developing the characters, their personalities, their motives, and the life around them. Good luck with your creative endeavors. English isn't my native language, so I use Google Translate.

Спасибо за главу

Спасибо за главу. Переписанная версия сильно лучше старой. Продолжай в том же духе. Надеюсь у тебя все получится

Спасибо за главу

За обновление спасибо, но мне кажется в главе используются самоповторы для увеличения количества текста?

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Спасибо за главу

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