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Its great weather its the protagonists character progression or the power scaling its great even the side character feel like actually people. And unlike other pjo fanfics its not super edgy

Great novel, if you enjoy science with supernatural like martial unity you will love this book. One of the best thing about this novel is that to grow stronger he uses science not some system or other bullcrap goldenfinger he actually has to try. Plus no harem and a great romance with Gwen Stacey thats honestly just as interesting as the action.

For a Chinese fanfic its great none of the normal courting death crap. Its at least 1 chapter a day usually two with a very good translation. Plus it being set in runeterra which means their is a lot of potential world building. And best of all it seems the romance is heavily leaning toward jinx/powder.

First their is constant spelling mistakes. The main character is pretty dumb and incredibly edgy and cringey like idk how you could post this I would rather have my bones broken then someone know that I wrote this and if you don’t believe me when i say this crap is incredible sasuke levels of cringe just look at the authors name. I was kinda hyped for the mana type because it was moon typing and was all like thats cool not like the cliche fire or lightning or both but then the mana color is crimson red….. that dont even make sense but i guess like any cliche power it’s either black crimson or both. That is the end of my rant disappointed because I really wanted to see a gun user and the moon mana type would have been the icing on the cake but whatever.

Agreed I thought it was pretty good till dude kept on saying such cringe lines and being pretty dumb