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Would be funny if you could just put Thyme in there and he'd be incapacitated/trapped there. One of the most powerful and dangerous creatures on the planet, having a weakness to simple storage rings.

*I wonder… I know some demon abilities work like that but not all of them. I wonder if it's something intrinsic to the way the ring works? Or if the ring just forcibly stops living things entering as a safety measure. I doubt there's air in there for things that still need it, so it might just be to stop idiots using them to kill people. Then again… living beings with qi or some other form of higher energy expelling that energy inside an expanded pocket of space might play havoc with the structure. Perhaps a bit of both?*

D.E.M.O.N.S: Getting Summoned Weekly isn't so Bad

D.E.M.O.N.S: Getting Summoned Weekly isn't so Bad

Fantasy · Vongrak

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'...in Euphoria', are you kidding me? First you have that whole questioning about MC wearing odd clothes and having an odd name and she has to dodge the topic by saying she's from the east, presumably another country. And now, Aiyoma happily gives her a tutorial to the whole world's common knowledge and what should be universal to everyone, without even questioning why the MC doesn't know about that?! That's so lazy writing, it's actually sad.

"There's four different types of sorcery: Pact-scrolls, magical scrolls, spells, and skills. Pact-scrolls work as incantations, usually requiring a sacrifice of some sort. Magical scrolls contain incredible magic that is hard to come by and are extremely valuable. Spells, however, are easier than the last two, and all that is needed is for someone to show you the spell once. Skills are, in a word, quite basic and needed for daily living in Euphoria."

Let's Imagine a Female Knight from Another World

Let's Imagine a Female Knight from Another World

Fantasy · WinterTimeCrime

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One bite, huh?

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I look at her genuine smile as we walk towards the tavern. She doesn't seem that bad, maybe one bite wouldn't hurt.

Let's Imagine a Female Knight from Another World

Let's Imagine a Female Knight from Another World

Fantasy · WinterTimeCrime

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Good point, didn't think of that.

She could create potions, pills, oils, and even poisons once she had developed her skills.

An Owl's Rise

An Owl's Rise

Fantasy · MegaC

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Why does he keep calling her Aria Schreiner? It makes it seem as if they are distant acquaintances at best. Significantly detracts from the importance of the 'terrible betrayal'.

"Goodbye, Aria Schreiner. I shall make great use of your discoveries. Perhaps, once I ascend, I will give you a chance to also be able to witness my greatness. That is, if I still remember about you by then." Azef closed the coffin lid, showing her one last smile.

The Summoner's Rebirth: Awaken, Milady

The Summoner's Rebirth: Awaken, Milady

Fantasy · illeannne

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What? And risk drinking whatever unfinished concoction she has in there? Or what about poisons, is she gonna stir those with her beak too?

She had found that for alchemy, she did not need her hands, as she could place any ingredients into a cauldron and could stir by using her beak

An Owl's Rise

An Owl's Rise

Fantasy · MegaC

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God, I hate when stupidity is rewarded for protagonists.

Yet what she did not realize at the time was how miraculous what she had just accomplished was, as no beast at her level ever should have been able to form a magic core the way humanoids did.

An Owl's Rise

An Owl's Rise

Fantasy · MegaC

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I'm getting tired of you writing tired instead of tried.

All of the trees she had visited were inhabited by some type of acid spitting wolverine, possum combo, and when she tired flying high for a better vantage point she was immediately attacks.

An Owl's Rise

An Owl's Rise

Fantasy · MegaC

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encloser -> enclosure

Then a massive root that was at least ten feet thick pierced through the ceiling and smashed into the ground of Evelyn's encloser.

An Owl's Rise

An Owl's Rise

Fantasy · MegaC

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tired -> tried. It seems this is not a simple mistake but that you actually don't the difference?

They would poke and prod her, electrocute her, and even opened up her chest and tired fiddling around with the thing that had rooted itself inside her.

An Owl's Rise

An Owl's Rise

Fantasy · MegaC

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