You're welcome!
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 0 1 Prologue
Fantasy · Ella_Estrella23
Thank for the review! ♥
That is the result of obsession 😌
"No, I can't. I can't let you go. I don't know what to do. I love you so much. I just want you by my side."
Fantasy · Ella_Estrella23
"But I still love you!" He expressed, taking one step closer, but Aylin held her hand forward to stop him from moving further.
Fantasy · Ella_Estrella23
"But I still love you!" He expressed, taking one step closer, but Aylin held her hand forward to stop him from moving further.
Fantasy · Ella_Estrella23
😂😂
Ugh! Aylin had hoped that the rain wouldn't start at least until she got home, but it seemed like luck was not on her side. What was she saying? Luck was never on her side.
Fantasy · Ella_Estrella23
Thank you! 😘
Draped in black cloaks—the figures fought in darkness and the only sounds that could be heard were the clanging of swords as they echoed off the snowy cliffs and the forest behind them.
Fantasy · Ella_Estrella23
Glad to know that!🤭
Locked in a battle of swordsmanship and magic; a red burning sword clashed against a white glowing silver sword, the light from each sword illuminating their surroundings. Both of their attacks hit each other to take the other down. The snow crunched underfoot as they moved and their movements were fluid, neither wanting to back down.
Fantasy · Ella_Estrella23
The description was good. I was able to imagine everything you described without a hitch, especially the room. The story's progress is also great, I loved how Arissa didn't immediately warm up to Mrs Wyatt because if she had then it would have been weird... Alright, next chap!
ch 27 Dutch Courage.
Urban · Lizbella
I shouldn't be complaining but the chapter was short 🥺
ch 25 [BONUS CHAPTER] It's her
Urban · Lizbella
OH MY! TWO CHAPTERS?! YOU ROCK AUTHOR!! ❤️💖
[BONUS CHAPTER] It's her
Urban · Lizbella
So sorry about your day, Author 🥺💜 But being half awake while typing and still being able to produce this beautiful chapter is something I must commend you for. What I love the most about this chapter was the change in behavior of the FL. I liked how she stood up for herself, threatened her useless parents, and thought positively. I'm loving this fiery side of the FL and I hope she can be like this and even fierier with the ML!!
ch 24 Manipulation
Urban · Lizbella
Take that old maggots!
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Urban · Lizbella
Continue
Arissa's smirk increased on her beautiful face as she now walked back to the couch and sat down more like a taunt to her parents, "I thought we would skip that Mr. Lincoln. It's been days and we have already sealed the agreements, haven't we."
Urban · Lizbella
I love the detailed description!
He was dressed in all black, from the tip of his ponytail down to his weary shoes.
The Raven Thief
Fantasy · Forteller