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This is truly an awesome read. It's lengthy but detailed. It makes you feel like you're there. There are some grammatical errors here and there. But other than that, there are no serious issues. It's like you've become apart of their lives and you are now invested.

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Fantasy · Ak02

ShadowGirl4

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Good novel, Author.

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Sci-fi · wowgood4you

ShadowGirl4

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Even this paragraph is too long for readers. You can just break it into two parts. It's just my suggestion, though.

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Sci-fi · wowgood4you

ShadowGirl4

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Also, make each chapter around 1500 to 2000 words to attract readers' attention. If the chapters or paragraphs are too long, they'll simply skip the novel.

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Sci-fi · wowgood4you

ShadowGirl4

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No problem. Writing a novel on this platform is mainly about rewriting and improving one's crafting skills, man. As long as you didn't change the main concept of the story, there'll be no problem. Best of luck.

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Sci-fi · wowgood4you

ShadowGirl4

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Thank you.

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ShadowGirl4

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ShadowGirl4

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Thanks

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