William_Pennington_7823

2yr

Commented

thank you for the update. looking forward to Scar based abilities. Even just the Deconstruction/Destruction Tattoo makes him very dangerous.

ch 48 The promise

Multiverse of Marvel

Movies · thelightedghost

William_Pennington_7823

2yr

Replied to Algir_Aska

I don't know about Edward, but it seems he is giving himself Scar's Alchemy Tattoos, I forget their official names. One arm is Destruction, the other arm is Transmutation, but i forget with the last one is.

"You will have to practice the science which you used on your hands. That power isn't simple and I hope you don't forget the theory of equivalent exchange." she said to John with a very serious expression.

Multiverse of Marvel

Movies · thelightedghost

William_Pennington_7823

2yr

Posted

This is a solid story with good writing. The plot isn't overly rushed, nor is it too slow. Something that is quite rare in all honesty. I will say that although the world building is truly great, the character interactions could use a little work. Mainly that people just seem to accept the MC word and suggestions a little to readily.

Multiverse of Marvel

Movies · thelightedghost

William_Pennington_7823

2yr

Posted

The story has a lot of potential and the writing quality isn't hard to read and slightly improves along the way so not really an issue. The only thing is the story wasn't updated for months so not sure if it will stick around.